Viscous Body of Woe -13

VISCOUS BODY OF WOE
fluid brain floods mind neurons flee boat breaks as dreams drown
June 24, 2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Gentry Avatar
July 2, 2018 at 4:56 PM
Congratulations on your win. Well done. :)
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July 3, 2018 at 12:10 AM
Thank you, Susan
Dutta Avatar
July 1, 2018 at 8:29 PM
Poem reveals that you are a scientist. Congrats to win.
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July 2, 2018 at 4:48 AM
Thank you.
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July 1, 2018 at 3:09 PM
I had to place this because the word viscous has too much power over my imagination ;) Congratulations on your win in my contest Subimal! xomo
Sinha-Roy Avatar
July 2, 2018 at 4:48 AM
Thank you, Moureen.
Man Avatar
June 25, 2018 at 6:52 AM
Wow.. I love this!
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June 26, 2018 at 1:33 AM
Thank you, Lyric for your visit.
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June 26, 2018 at 1:33 AM
Thank you, Lyric for your visit.
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