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A torrent of emotional joy Hazy sunlight and an opalescent sky a cool breeze that rests gently In mystical circles, where the swing gently swings a myriad of wings of song This also sounds depressing. perplexing ideas in my mind Sun loungers replenish and revitalize It was poured in the shape of barbed wire The floods drive the rest away Cleanse the fragile soil of hidden lies Making bravery out of openness Dragons raze dwellings. I heard the murmurs under the bare twigs While scratching the sky, tears flow from the dismal, boulder-filled sky Torrid foundation with fall-leaf stain Love kept me going and bearing That is all. I had grown up.   A sensual touch may be quite relaxing surely exude timid shyness People will admit advantage of you to persuade you, They truly helped
Written: November 19, 2022

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Date: 11/19/2022 8:03:00 AM
Great verse, Lasaad. Cleanse the fragile soil of hidden lies. Amen. Blessings friend
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