Virgin Red Lips Waltzing With Color Red

He rises from the shores to his love where she dwells where true love is lost and capable of great love to kiss those virgin red lips that never felt passions love © 7/3/2015
Syllables Per Line: 1 2 1 2 3 2 1 2 3 4 3 2 1 2 3 2 1 2 1 http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_resources/syllable_counter.aspx Contest Name: Waltzing with Color Red Sponsor: Kim Merryman
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July 22, 2015 at 11:58 PM
Eve,, Congratulations on your wonderful win. Always ~LINDA~
Roper Avatar
July 27, 2015 at 9:17 AM
Thank you, Linda, Love your visits. Hugs Eve
Kendrick Avatar
July 20, 2015 at 4:24 PM
The Waltz has danced in rhythm and won!!! Way to go!! Congrats
Roper Avatar
July 20, 2015 at 4:35 PM
Thank you, Sara, it sure has. Hugs dear friend
Dietrich Avatar
July 20, 2015 at 3:41 PM
ooh la la. virgin red lips.So creative, Eve. Congrats in the contest.
Roper Avatar
July 20, 2015 at 4:03 PM
Thank you, Andrea, for the congratulations it was fun to write . Hugs Eve
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July 20, 2015 at 3:24 PM
Eve, congrats for winning SKAT's contest! hugs
Roper Avatar
July 20, 2015 at 4:02 PM
Thank you, Kim, for the congratulations. Hugs Eve
A  Avatar
July 19, 2015 at 3:25 PM
EVE, Congrats on your Waltzing with Color win. Love SKAT
Roper Avatar
July 19, 2015 at 3:40 PM
Thank you, Skat. ooxx
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July 19, 2015 at 1:33 PM
In this piece you so artfully brought out all the beauty and romance of the color red! Congratulations on your win, dear Eve! Warmest regards. Pandita
Roper Avatar
July 19, 2015 at 3:40 PM
Thank you, Pandita. ooxx
May Avatar
July 19, 2015 at 9:33 AM
Wonderful write Eve... Congrats on your win
Roper Avatar
July 19, 2015 at 3:41 PM
Thank you, Joseph. ooxx
Allison Avatar
July 19, 2015 at 5:18 AM
a passionate poem Eve many congrats:-) hugs Jan xx
Roper Avatar
July 19, 2015 at 3:41 PM
Thank you,Jan. ooxx
Carter Avatar
July 18, 2015 at 11:50 PM
Enjoyed your poem eve! Congrats on your win~ lee
Roper Avatar
July 19, 2015 at 3:42 PM
Thank you, Lee. ooxx
Merryman Avatar
July 18, 2015 at 11:32 PM
A well written waltz wave, Eve! Congrats on your placement and thank you for participating in my contest! Love, Kim
Roper Avatar
July 19, 2015 at 3:43 PM
Thank you, Kim, I'm so glad you have enjoyed my work and bring more inspiration to write. ooxx
Dietrich Avatar
July 6, 2015 at 3:42 PM
you did well with this color. VERy well!!
Roper Avatar
July 19, 2015 at 3:44 PM
Thank you, Andrea. ooxx
Callus Avatar
July 5, 2015 at 2:02 PM
Ah! those red virgin lips will soon know what passion is! Lovely scene you have set us to enjoy, Eve! gl in contest. // paul
Roper Avatar
July 5, 2015 at 2:04 PM
Thank you, Paul. Hugs dear friend eve
Pinet Avatar
July 3, 2015 at 4:28 PM
This is very well written with impeccable imagery. Emile.
Roper Avatar
July 3, 2015 at 6:42 PM
Thank you, Emile, for your inspiring words of encouragement. Hugs Eve
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