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Virgin Land

Tiny diamonds fall White blanket covers the ground Peace of Virgin land 20/12/2018

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Mahtab Bangalee

Date: 10/24/2019 4:46:00 AM

yeah' it's beautiful

Elaine Perrin

Date: 10/21/2019 2:55:00 PM

Beautiful :-) x

Vladislav Raven

Date: 1/17/2019 6:30:00 PM

I would like to thank all those who drop by to view this piece. Your visits help a poet to keep singing. have a wonderful Friday. Hugs....Mike. XX

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/5/2019 8:33:00 PM

what happened to all your older poems?

Vladislav Raven
Date: 1/6/2019 2:52:00 PM

Hi Andrea, I removed all my poems onto disc because, as I am starting a new chapter in my life, I decided to start a new chapter on the soup. They shall be reposted through time. Have a wonderful Sunday. hugs....Mike. XX

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/5/2019 8:32:00 PM

this is very pretty, Michael. I wish I had time to read more of your poetry but I"ve fallen behind here again. I hope your new year is going well so far!

Vladislav Raven
Date: 1/6/2019 2:46:00 PM

Hi Andrea, thank you for dropping by and the comment on my Winter Haiku, it is much appreciated. I am so glad you liked the piece. I do so love the snow, whether out in it or just watching it from inside. My New Year is going well. All the best for 2019. Have a wonderful Sunday. Hugs....Mike. XX

Paul Callus

Date: 12/31/2018 2:08:00 PM

An offering of virginal beauty, Mike. Love the serene image you have created. Best regards, my friend. // paul

Vladislav Raven
Date: 1/4/2019 3:45:00 PM

Hi Paul, thank you for dropping by and the comment on my winter piece, it is much appreciated. I am so glad you liked the piece Paul. I do love to watch the snow, even to be in it as it falls. Slowly the world seems to become clean and find rest in the snow's embrace. Have a wonderful weekend. Your friend always....Mike.

Constance La France

Date: 12/26/2018 9:10:00 AM

Mike, a beautiful haiku, best of luck with your new chapter in writing ~

Vladislav Raven
Date: 12/31/2018 8:39:00 AM

Hi Constance, thank you for dropping by and the comment on this piece, it is much appreciated. i am do glad you liked the piece. I do so love just looking out the window and watcj=hing the snow. It can give me such peace and joy. Have a very Happy New Year. Hugs....Mike. XX

Arthur Vaso

Date: 12/20/2018 10:59:00 PM

Very beautiful Haiku!!!

Vladislav Raven
Date: 12/23/2018 7:22:00 AM

Hi Arthur, thank you for dropping by and the comment on this piece, it is much appreciated. I am glad you liked the piece. I do love the snow, it can give me such joy and peace as I watch it falling and lying pristine on the ground. Have a wonderful Sunday. Your friend....Mike.

Susan Ashley

Date: 12/20/2018 6:57:00 PM

Oh, I love the spiritual tone of this exquisite haiku, Mike, and I love the snow, it does bring me peace.. its white calms and quiets my soul with soothing comfort. I relish the beauty of your poem, Mike. Warmest wishes always my wonderful friend.. ~Susan

Vladislav Raven
Date: 12/23/2018 6:47:00 AM

Hi Susan, thank you for dropping by and the comment on this piece, it is much appreciated. I am so glad you liked the piece. I do love the snow, I could spend hours just watching it fall as peace comes over my soul. I haven't tried a Haiku in a while. Have a wonderful Sunday. Hugs....Mike. XX

James Marshall Goff

Date: 12/20/2018 6:06:00 PM

Nice work Mike! Where did your poems go?

Vladislav Raven
Date: 12/23/2018 5:54:00 AM

Hi Jmes, thank you for dropping by and the comment on this write, it is much appreciated. I am glad you liked the piece. I do love looking out as the snow does fall and see it spreading across the ground. As far as my poems go, I am starting a new chapter in my life so I thought I would start new with poems also. They shall be reposted. have a wonderful Sunday. Your friend always....Mike.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 12/20/2018 4:38:00 PM

A lovely pristine scene Mike. Peaceful and serene indeed! What happened to all your poems? Did you remove them to make a book? xxoo

Vladislav Raven
Date: 12/22/2018 7:50:00 PM

Hi Connie, thank you for dropping by and the comment on my winter Haiku, it is much appreciated. I do love the snow, just watching it brings me peace. I love watching it as it falls so gently to the ground. As far as my poems go, I am starting a new chapter of my life so I decided to start a new chapter on the soup. I still have the poems and many of them shall be reposted. Have a wonderful Sunday. Hugs....Mike. XX

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 12/20/2018 3:34:00 PM

Snow does glisten like diamonds and is a sweet gift from nature that gives us a peaceful feeling. A lovely haiku, my friend. Kind of puts a Florida gal in the Christmas spirit. Thanks, Vladislav! Hugs, Carolyn

Vladislav Raven
Date: 12/21/2018 9:10:00 PM

Hi Carolyn, thank you for dropping by and the comment on my winter write, it is much appreciated. I do love the snow, just watching it out the window, tiny diamonds falling. How soon a winter wonderland before the eyes. Peace comes into the heart. Have a wonderful Saturday. Hugs....Mike. XX

Vijay Pandit

Date: 12/20/2018 3:14:00 PM

You describe a land ..unspoiled and virgin..no wonder it is peaceful there. Well captured in just a few words, Mike.

Vladislav Raven
Date: 12/21/2018 8:43:00 PM

Hi Vijay, thank you for dropping by and the comment on my winter Haiku, it is much appreciated. I am so glad you liked the piece. The snow does always bring me peace. I love to sit and just watch it through the window, especially when it first starts to fall, beautiful. Have a wonderful Saturday. Your friend always....Mike.