Virgin and Child-2

The Virgin and Child

Matrix of allusions.Its intersections
dipped in the beckoning depths of  chaste dark 
to grow limbs like any other. To mark
a departure into a great mission.
Life  dipped in a suave and rare medium
of strokes and streaks . Who would not sense
in the vision-flatness an equilibrium
of  solidity and reassurance.
The harboring grid of hardened faith
is crowned with thorns of colored distractions
without the telling placenta of birth
but  still-lifed  in womb-dark meditation
I ‘m the virgin, the lactating breasts, the birth 
I ‘m the baby of the resurgent earth.

Form:  A modern Sonnet, attempted.

**Based on the painting “ Virgin and child” by SOFONISBA ANGUISSOLA 

S.Jagathsimhan Nair,
 26th Oct  2013.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Mcdaid Avatar
September 29, 2014 at 6:35 PM
truly outstanding piece very beautifully penned bless you
Puddifoot Avatar
February 6, 2014 at 5:38 AM
congrats on your great win, jaggy, this is a really outstanding poem! and it seems some people are just discovering what I have always known: that you are a first rate poet, one of the best on this site! I said you have many wonderful pieces, and this is certainly one of them - I'm so glad my attention was called to it :) charlotte
Richards Avatar
February 5, 2014 at 2:56 PM
At the end, .....you say "A modern Sonnet attempted" ?? Well, not only attempted, but you have written above and beyond, succeeded in every line! This is amazing!
Onclaud Avatar
February 5, 2014 at 1:19 PM
i call tjis sublime and dleictae, jag.. congrats!
Kendrick Avatar
February 5, 2014 at 12:03 PM
Ahh!! Great quality poetry!! Way to go with this win..Congrats..Sara
Lamoureux Avatar
February 5, 2014 at 9:01 AM
Well expressed! Congratulations.
Mehta Avatar
February 5, 2014 at 12:47 AM
Lovely write on Art and congrats on the fine win, s.nair
Mehta Avatar
January 31, 2014 at 8:10 AM
wonderful and impressive write and congrats on the win, S.Nair
A  Avatar
January 28, 2014 at 1:52 PM
JAG, <3<3*CONGRATULATIONS, I THANK YOU VERY MUCH FOR ENTERING MY CONTEST. Take care ~SKAT~
Posey Avatar
November 6, 2013 at 7:23 PM
My friend you art a true artist. You can dip your quill in my ink anytime..... Somehow, I believe it would Improve my writing.... Great work..... Jake
Kendrick Avatar
November 1, 2013 at 9:51 AM
Interesting work..Reads like winning material to me.Enjoyed reading your contest entry..Sara
Onclaud Avatar
October 28, 2013 at 11:22 AM
incredibly composed with a flow and expression that simply delight, jag.. i want this to win!..:) huggs
Andresen Avatar
October 27, 2013 at 5:19 AM
- As Blessed Virgin Mary .... skilled and very well written, Jag. - Good luck in the contest! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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