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Vipers Along the Path

The road is long and it is not yet known where it will eventuallly lead us Dangers will face us on our arduous journey There are vipers along the path As we travel we must be careful A sudden misstep can have terrible consequences There are vipers along the path On a journey whose end is unknown Our fortunes are tied to the stars in the heavens above To avoid the vipers along the path We must watch the road vigilantly FOR THERE ARE VIPERS ALONG THE PATH!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 8/8/2012 1:51:00 PM
Yes, the road does have vipers which can really ruin our lives..Enjoyed reading your creative and metaphoric work..Thanks for stopping by....Sara
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Date: 8/6/2012 7:14:00 PM
No legs and two legs - both will get you.Good write.
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Date: 8/1/2012 11:15:00 PM
Really can identify with this one Matthew; I wrote somthing similar a while back ( not on vipers exactly though ) can't bring to mind the title now
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Date: 8/1/2012 12:12:00 PM
Matthew I like the simile with modern day life,,,David
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