Violin Coaster

Not sure what this is growing from within
feeling like the quiet crescendo of a violin
rising higher, feather-floating up through the air
the intensity keeps building, and I am made aware
of the color of my soul - the emotions that I hide
the feel of the rollercoaster as I get on to ride
the dips are so fast the turns so exciting 
the thrill is sweet and quite inviting
the laughter erupts from deep within my belly
it makes me feel like I am in a tub full of jelly
soothing and delightful, such sweet bliss
like the feel of the flutter after a first kiss
violin playing, gently and low, 
the rollercoaster begins to slow
does it have to change when I climb off
the thudding of my heart will beat soft...
Content yet wanting more will be my request
this is what its like in the middle of happiness....
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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A  Avatar
March 23, 2010 at 5:27 PM
A very good poem. Don't let no demon tell u diffrent..Enjoyed..
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March 23, 2010 at 4:03 AM
well written---enjoyed reading today on this early morning, nice way to start my day.
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