Violated By My Own Imagination

Creepy crawling slimy wiggly thing
Feels eerily strange against my pajama leg
I wake up suddenly
Thinking cobra
or sleazy wet rat
violated by my own imagination
Snatching my explorer hat
out of the clutches of the crocodile
in the swampy forest floor

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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Date: 5/18/2019 4:45:00 PM
Reads like a scary situation. Wouldn't want to be where there is a crocodile close enough to be getting my hat. LOL..Sara
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 5/18/2019 5:39:00 PM
I tell you Sara, if I had a dollar for every time I had this dream, I would have a dollar. Thank you for stopping by!
Date: 5/18/2019 6:10:00 AM
Ha ha Karen: I have had nightmares about pit bulls.....long before I was actually attacked by one. You don’t live in crocodile country though...do you? Hugs, SuZ
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 5/18/2019 6:21:00 AM
I am no where near them, and yet I greatly fear them.
Date: 5/18/2019 4:43:00 AM
Abundent information and imagniation in a few lines. Great!
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 5/18/2019 6:21:00 AM
Thank you my pink fairy friend. I am PinkFaerie5 on another poetry site.
Date: 5/17/2019 11:49:00 PM
Och. That's quite a dream dear Caren
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 5/18/2019 4:11:00 AM
I have them or I make them up. I am a liar, Allen. It is the key to my existence as a poet and an artist.
Date: 5/17/2019 8:41:00 PM
A cornucopia of chilling circumstances Caren--who'd of thought, eh, Aloha wk
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 5/17/2019 8:42:00 PM
It happens every once in awhile and yet I am always amazed and surprised I have escaped another alligator's masticating teeth.
Date: 5/17/2019 7:42:00 PM
very creepily described, Caren. I have had dreams like that one!!
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 5/17/2019 8:38:00 PM
I have to run with whatever pops into my head.
Date: 5/17/2019 5:35:00 PM
lol you are many things Karen, one is a wonderful creative writer, I wonder what else ? hmmm,
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 5/17/2019 8:39:00 PM
I am a cartoonist, and artist,a grandma, a mommy, a gardener, and a messy person who loves everything except drama. I especially love shiny things and lots of color.
Date: 5/17/2019 2:29:00 PM
Crocodile Dundee reprised! G'day, Caren. :) gw
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 5/17/2019 4:41:00 PM
Yes, this is so true. I was desperate for something, not wanting to disappoint myself today so I threw this down on a ten minute break at work.
Date: 5/17/2019 1:23:00 PM
... your imagination never stops, Caren :) ... where do all the poems come from :))) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 5/17/2019 4:41:00 PM
The warrior, the princess, the faerie, the pixie, the lion, the wolf, the pirate, and the queen of everything in my head - all fighting to write it first.
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