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Violated By My Own Imagination

Creepy crawling slimy wiggly thing Feels eerily strange against my pajama leg I wake up suddenly Thinking cobra or sleazy wet rat violated by my own imagination Snatching my explorer hat out of the clutches of the crocodile in the swampy forest floor

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/18/2019 4:45:00 PM

Reads like a scary situation. Wouldn't want to be where there is a crocodile close enough to be getting my hat. LOL..Sara

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 5/18/2019 5:39:00 PM

I tell you Sara, if I had a dollar for every time I had this dream, I would have a dollar. Thank you for stopping by!

Suzanne Delaney

Date: 5/18/2019 6:10:00 AM

Ha ha Karen: I have had nightmares about pit bulls.....long before I was actually attacked by one. You don’t live in crocodile country though...do you? Hugs, SuZ

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 5/18/2019 6:21:00 AM

I am no where near them, and yet I greatly fear them.

Stina Lu

Date: 5/18/2019 4:43:00 AM

Abundent information and imagniation in a few lines. Great!

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 5/18/2019 6:21:00 AM

Thank you my pink fairy friend. I am PinkFaerie5 on another poetry site.

Allen Beilschmidt Sr.

Date: 5/17/2019 11:49:00 PM

Och. That's quite a dream dear Caren

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 5/18/2019 4:11:00 AM

I have them or I make them up. I am a liar, Allen. It is the key to my existence as a poet and an artist.

Hilo Poet

Date: 5/17/2019 8:41:00 PM

A cornucopia of chilling circumstances Caren--who'd of thought, eh, Aloha wk

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 5/17/2019 8:42:00 PM

It happens every once in awhile and yet I am always amazed and surprised I have escaped another alligator's masticating teeth.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/17/2019 7:42:00 PM

very creepily described, Caren. I have had dreams like that one!!

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 5/17/2019 8:38:00 PM

I have to run with whatever pops into my head.

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 5/17/2019 5:35:00 PM

lol you are many things Karen, one is a wonderful creative writer, I wonder what else ? hmmm,

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 5/17/2019 8:39:00 PM

I am a cartoonist, and artist,a grandma, a mommy, a gardener, and a messy person who loves everything except drama. I especially love shiny things and lots of color.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 5/17/2019 2:29:00 PM

Crocodile Dundee reprised! G'day, Caren. :) gw

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 5/17/2019 4:41:00 PM

Yes, this is so true. I was desperate for something, not wanting to disappoint myself today so I threw this down on a ten minute break at work.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/17/2019 1:23:00 PM

... your imagination never stops, Caren :) ... where do all the poems come from :))) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 5/17/2019 4:41:00 PM

The warrior, the princess, the faerie, the pixie, the lion, the wolf, the pirate, and the queen of everything in my head - all fighting to write it first.