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Wild rapid peaks of sunrise cheeks. The man I wed, my choice was fine. In hold of hands, whirlpool with you, Our troubles spout a robust hue. We laugh, we land on years, sublime. In hold of hands, whirlpool with you, We bounce along the crest of time. In citrus sun of lemon-lime, Our troubles spout a robust hue. Wild rapid peaks In hold of hands. Whirlpool with you - Its spin, worthwhile, at vintage time. Our troubles spout a robust hue Of sunrise cheeks. Of sunrise cheeks, Wild rapid peaks… 1/13/2022 Meditative Ballad Sponsor: Emile Pinet Used rhymezone and HMS

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Date: 1/30/2022 5:06:00 PM
And the winner is KIM!!! Imagery and creative penmanship is on fire. Without any disrespect to my poetry family and contestants and myself this is just a masterpiece displayed on a form that is not easy to burst out rainbows of breathless creative crafted word flow.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/30/2022 5:42:00 PM
Thank you so much, Johnny! I really appreciate your support! I had fun writing this.
Date: 1/14/2022 10:54:00 PM
This breathtaking poem should immediately bounce into a first for the contest. It is creatively written, a wonderful Ballad, Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/23/2022 12:59:00 PM
Thank you so much, Jennifer! :)
Date: 1/14/2022 8:35:00 PM
Wonderful Kim ! You have done it.... a very hard form of poetry and that too in a splendid way !
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/14/2022 9:00:00 PM
Thank you, Valsa!
Date: 1/14/2022 12:27:00 AM
I love the imagery here, Kim, especially the first two lines, brilliant:)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/14/2022 6:30:00 AM
Thank you!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/14/2022 6:29:00 AM
Thank you!
Date: 1/13/2022 10:53:00 AM
Hello Kim, I am glad you are happy in your marriage. Hugs.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 1/14/2022 11:40:00 AM
Hello Kim, you are welcome. Hugs.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/13/2022 12:47:00 PM
Thank you, Darlene <3
Date: 1/13/2022 9:23:00 AM
You wed an upright person. May you both have many happy years ahead. Blessings to both. Hugs
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/13/2022 9:29:00 AM
Thank you so much, my friend!
Date: 1/13/2022 8:52:00 AM
You made an excellent choice Kim, wishing you both many more happy years together. Tom
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/13/2022 9:29:00 AM
Thank you, dear friend!

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