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Vintage Time

Wild rapid peaks
   of sunrise cheeks.

The man I wed, my choice was fine.
      In hold of hands, whirlpool with you,
   Our troubles spout a robust hue.
We laugh, we land on years, sublime.

In hold of hands, whirlpool with you,
      We bounce along the crest of time.
   In citrus sun of lemon-lime,
Our troubles spout a robust hue.

Wild rapid peaks
   In hold of hands. Whirlpool with you -
      Its spin, worthwhile, at vintage time.
   Our troubles spout a robust hue
Of sunrise cheeks.

   Of sunrise cheeks,
Wild rapid peaks…

1/13/2022
Meditative Ballad
Sponsor: Emile Pinet

Used rhymezone and HMS
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Sumler Avatar
January 30, 2022 at 5:06 PM
And the winner is KIM!!! Imagery and creative penmanship is on fire. Without any disrespect to my poetry family and contestants and myself this is just a masterpiece displayed on a form that is not easy to burst out rainbows of breathless creative crafted word flow.
Rodrigues Avatar
January 30, 2022 at 5:42 PM
Thank you so much, Johnny! I really appreciate your support! I had fun writing this.
Proxenos Avatar
January 14, 2022 at 10:54 PM
This breathtaking poem should immediately bounce into a first for the contest. It is creatively written, a wonderful Ballad, Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Rodrigues Avatar
January 23, 2022 at 12:59 PM
Thank you so much, Jennifer! :)
George Avatar
January 14, 2022 at 8:35 PM
Wonderful Kim ! You have done it.... a very hard form of poetry and that too in a splendid way !
Rodrigues Avatar
January 14, 2022 at 9:00 PM
Thank you, Valsa!
Daniel Avatar
January 14, 2022 at 12:27 AM
I love the imagery here, Kim, especially the first two lines, brilliant:)
Rodrigues Avatar
January 14, 2022 at 6:30 AM
Thank you!
Rodrigues Avatar
January 14, 2022 at 6:29 AM
Thank you!
De Beaulieu Avatar
January 13, 2022 at 10:53 AM
Hello Kim, I am glad you are happy in your marriage. Hugs.
De Beaulieu Avatar
January 14, 2022 at 11:40 AM
Hello Kim, you are welcome. Hugs.
Rodrigues Avatar
January 13, 2022 at 12:47 PM
Thank you, Darlene <3
Buhagiar Avatar
January 13, 2022 at 9:23 AM
You wed an upright person. May you both have many happy years ahead. Blessings to both. Hugs
Rodrigues Avatar
January 13, 2022 at 9:29 AM
Thank you so much, my friend!
Cunningham Avatar
January 13, 2022 at 8:52 AM
You made an excellent choice Kim, wishing you both many more happy years together. Tom
Rodrigues Avatar
January 13, 2022 at 9:29 AM
Thank you, dear friend!
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