Vine Tree

With
     an earthly
                  rhyme 
                         an all
             surroundings
an' shrine
Rushed
To climb
Th' tree
Of vine
And rine
I reached to the top all alone 
Anxious to look down and see
What the world looks like 
An' suddenly a bird flew
Right across my eyes
I slipped from the branch and fell down 
Then stood up and started to climb again

24/12/2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Gupta Avatar
December 24, 2016 at 8:32 AM
What a lovely strife ... Climbing is life ...
Kalishian Avatar
December 24, 2016 at 9:33 AM
Probiiiir you always get me hhh Missed you.. ;)
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