Vindictive Sanctuary

Introduction: Blindfolded the world fades today, optimism awaits tomorrow... Lies have many expressions Can make one follow the mistaken, Love has countless sensations Can make one feel awaken, Seek out the truth from its buried nation As the deception has made it forsaken No one knows where you’d disappear For things you care is what you feel, No one knows of what you hear, One day you will deem what’s real Ask Almighty to steer you clear Help you save from your ordeal

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Gary Fields

Date: 8/2/2011 5:44:00 AM

This write was well worth the testimony! I have alway's love a good rhyme and their is alway's truth to a lie. These poem's somehow are being written in the same vein as my own! Your work impress me, plus you seem to spell better than I do...... SEE LAST DAYS which is a poem of mind..... But I have to say that I am going to steal the introduction from you, and us it. May-be we can be the best of the pen/Your friend in the pen/G.FIELDS

Aqeb Be-Nazir Ibn Minar
Date: 8/2/2011 5:08:00 PM

I'm glad that you can relate to this!!...Oh I'd love to see you Try and Steal, as these Intro's don't come cheap!! they get your attention wildly don't they ;) It's my tagline! thanks for the comment Gary! I appreciate it!

Judy Ball

Date: 8/2/2011 1:25:00 AM

Too many people walk around blindfolded today and are easily led down the wrong path by the lies of clever devious people around them. We must pray for forgiveness and turn back to the old ways. God Bless, JB

Aqeb Be-Nazir Ibn Minar
Date: 8/2/2011 5:10:00 PM

Yes, that's exactly what I meant and conveyed through my poem!! I'm gratified that you saw and realized this. thanks for commenting!

Olivia Huddleston

Date: 8/1/2011 12:11:00 AM

Very good job Aqeb. I love it.(:

Aqeb Be-Nazir Ibn Minar
Date: 8/2/2011 5:11:00 PM

Thank you!

Dan Kearley

Date: 7/31/2011 3:24:00 PM

A few to many clicks...??? Haha