Aqeb Be-Nazir Ibn Minar Poet Monorhyme

Vindictive Sanctuary

Introduction: Blindfolded the world fades today, optimism awaits tomorrow...


Lies have many expressions
Can make one follow the mistaken,
Love has countless sensations
Can make one feel awaken,
Seek out the truth from its buried nation
As the deception has made it forsaken

No one knows where you’d disappear
For things you care is what you feel,
No one knows of what you hear,
One day you will deem what’s real
Ask Almighty to steer you clear
Help you save from your ordeal

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Gary Fields August 2, 2011 at 5:44 AM This write was well worth the testimony! I have alway's love a good rhyme and their is alway's truth to a lie. These poem's somehow are being written in the same vein as my own! Your work impress me, plus you seem to spell better than I do...... SEE LAST DAYS which is a poem of mind..... But I have to say that I am going to steal the introduction from you, and us it. May-be we can be the best of the pen/Your friend in the pen/G.FIELDS Aqeb Be-Nazir Ibn Minar August 2, 2011 at 5:08 PM I'm glad that you can relate to this!!...Oh I'd love to see you Try and Steal, as these Intro's don't come cheap!! they get your attention wildly don't they ;) It's my tagline! thanks for the comment Gary! I appreciate it!

Judy Ball August 2, 2011 at 1:25 AM Too many people walk around blindfolded today and are easily led down the wrong path by the lies of clever devious people around them. We must pray for forgiveness and turn back to the old ways. God Bless, JB Aqeb Be-Nazir Ibn Minar August 2, 2011 at 5:10 PM Yes, that's exactly what I meant and conveyed through my poem!! I'm gratified that you saw and realized this. thanks for commenting!

Olivia Huddleston August 1, 2011 at 12:11 AM Very good job Aqeb. I love it.(: Aqeb Be-Nazir Ibn Minar August 2, 2011 at 5:11 PM Thank you!

Dan Kearley July 31, 2011 at 3:24 PM A few to many clicks...??? Haha