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On that glorious evening, don't sleep subtly. Utterly, prime-age ought to portray a furious fire. Rage for the waning daylight with ferocity. Even if bold people realize the terrible dire. Their tirades were drab due to a lack of bloom. Utterly, prime-age ought to portray a furious fire. An ultimate wave passed, awed by its gloom. Their lamest act could be green bay dancing. Their tirades were drab due to a lack of bloom. Feral people sang to the sun while swooping. Some claim they're bawling on the path too late. Their lamest act could be green bay dancing. Those on the verge of death due to a disease. Eager eyes can shine as meteors even when blind. Some claim they're bawling on the path too late. And you: my dad, upon the bleak hillside. On that glorious evening, don't sleep subtly. Eyes can shine as meteors even when blind. Rage for the waning daylight with ferocity.
Written: October 20, 2021

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Date: 10/21/2021 1:38:00 AM
A tribute to your father. Not all can accept death. We must. It's our destiny.
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