Vincent Loved Yellow

Vincent
loved yellow fields
brightly lit amber rooms
wild, thick colors that seemed to say
van Gogh

5/25/17

artcolorcinquain

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Paul Callus

Date: 6/4/2017 9:01:00 AM

Pleased to be back with congratulations, Janis...very merited! Regards // paul

Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 6/4/2017 1:17:00 PM

Thanks, Paul.

Jan Allison

Date: 5/31/2017 6:51:00 PM

he did love this colour Janis - congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx

Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 6/1/2017 3:21:00 PM

Thanks Jan. Blessings, Janis

James Inman

Date: 5/31/2017 1:56:00 AM

Love the way you begin with his first name and end with his last and the smooth flow that almost hides the clever way you used it.

Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 6/1/2017 3:23:00 PM

Thanks for the comment James. Great observation.

John Anderson

Date: 5/31/2017 1:13:00 AM

Congratulations with your place in the Cinquain contest. A delightful poem that exemplifies what the form is about. Very nice poem, well done. I love Vincent!!! Cheers,

Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 6/1/2017 3:26:00 PM

A good contest. Thanks for considering it.

Paul Callus

Date: 5/30/2017 5:09:00 PM

Very clever take for this Cinquain contest, Janis. I like the poem's presentation and content...and Van Gogh, of course! Regards // paul

Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 5/31/2017 9:20:00 PM

Thanks Paul.