Anitha Jayasankar Poet Verse

Village

Views of fertile valleys, 
Vast blue sky above and
Verdant green fields mark the
Vibrance of my hamlet;
Vacation trip to my
Vivacious village fills
Voidness of my dull soul.


Date: 05/05/2021
Submitted for: Pleiades V Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Kim Merryman

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Kim Rodrigues May 9, 2021 at 6:52 PM Congratulations!

Andrea Dietrich May 9, 2021 at 4:11 PM i just knew this would be a topper.Way to go, sweet friend. Happy Mother's day

Paul Callus May 8, 2021 at 1:44 PM Excellent, Anitha! Not easy to write this this form poetically, but you managed with apparent ease! Congratulations on placing first! Regards // paul

Janice Canerdy May 8, 2021 at 12:18 PM A masterpiece, Anitha! CONGRATS on your win. Janice

Anne-Lise Andresen May 8, 2021 at 11:11 AM - Ani, a wonderful poem ... congratulations on your top spot on the winner list :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Krish Radhakrishna May 8, 2021 at 8:49 AM Congrats on your top win! very well done! so positive!!

Kim Merryman May 8, 2021 at 8:13 AM Beautifully descriptive, with smooth flowing lines. Congrats on your 1st place win, Anitha! Blessings, Kim M

Christuraj Alex May 7, 2021 at 11:33 PM Congratulations!

Victor Buhagiar May 6, 2021 at 1:54 AM Beautiful Pleiades. Should rate high. Such imagery makes me want to read more.

Gershon Wolf May 6, 2021 at 12:59 AM Stirring use of the 'V's! Superb contest entry, Ani. Verity and Victory, gw

Daniel Turner May 5, 2021 at 4:55 PM This is excellent, Anitha. Sure to be on the winners' list. I see below I am not the only one to think that. Good luck!

Andrea Dietrich May 5, 2021 at 1:48 PM you are amazing, Anitha. This is sure to place first!! you chose such a lovely word. I bet you can guess what mine will be?

Quoth Theraven May 5, 2021 at 8:18 AM Anitha, A hamlet awaits return of familiar face. A poet's voice stirred now in our Soup. -Richard