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Views of fertile valleys, Vast blue sky above and Verdant green fields mark the Vibrance of my hamlet; Vacation trip to my Vivacious village fills Voidness of my dull soul. Date: 05/05/2021 Submitted for: Pleiades V Poetry Contest Sponsor: Kim Merryman

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Date: 5/9/2021 6:52:00 PM
Congratulations!
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Date: 5/9/2021 4:11:00 PM
i just knew this would be a topper.Way to go, sweet friend. Happy Mother's day
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Date: 5/8/2021 1:44:00 PM
Excellent, Anitha! Not easy to write this this form poetically, but you managed with apparent ease! Congratulations on placing first! Regards // paul
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Date: 5/8/2021 12:18:00 PM
A masterpiece, Anitha! CONGRATS on your win. Janice
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Date: 5/8/2021 11:11:00 AM
- Ani, a wonderful poem ... congratulations on your top spot on the winner list :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/8/2021 8:49:00 AM
Congrats on your top win! very well done! so positive!!
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Date: 5/8/2021 8:18:00 AM
Anitha, this is a wonderful Pleiades. Congratulations on your top win. Carol Louise
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Date: 5/8/2021 8:13:00 AM
Beautifully descriptive, with smooth flowing lines. Congrats on your 1st place win, Anitha! Blessings, Kim M
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Date: 5/7/2021 11:33:00 PM
Congratulations!
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Date: 5/6/2021 1:54:00 AM
Beautiful Pleiades. Should rate high. Such imagery makes me want to read more.
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Date: 5/6/2021 12:59:00 AM
Stirring use of the 'V's! Superb contest entry, Ani. Verity and Victory, gw
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Date: 5/5/2021 4:55:00 PM
This is excellent, Anitha. Sure to be on the winners' list. I see below I am not the only one to think that. Good luck!
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Date: 5/5/2021 1:48:00 PM
you are amazing, Anitha. This is sure to place first!! you chose such a lovely word. I bet you can guess what mine will be?
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Date: 5/5/2021 8:18:00 AM
Anitha, A hamlet awaits return of familiar face. A poet's voice stirred now in our Soup. -Richard
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