Viking Funeral

Viking Funeral

When that day comes that I will die 
Dress me in the finest clothing
Patterned from a textured sharksin
As the sun sets east and reflects 
upon the sea so warm and blue
Place me in a red sailing craft  
Hand carved from an exquisite teak
Surround me with my memories 
My keepsakes and my written words
And when the tide goes out to sea
You may set my sails pointed west 

Aim and shoot a flaming arrow  
To pierce the boat set it aflame
And consume me on my final sail
When the last flame is extinguished,
Retrieve my ashes from the craft 
And place them in an marble jar
And toss it in the ocean deep

My life has always been mundane
 I never lived to seize the day
Good  luck and judgements never meshed 
My essence nor my core refreshed
To take a trip in such a way
To be remembered on that day
Will seal the memory of my death
When I have breathed my final breath

*Revised Poem from years ago
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016


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Date: 10/8/2016 1:18:00 PM
- A special way to leave this world, great written Ralph - hugs // Anne-Lise (a true Vikings :)
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Date: 10/8/2016 5:31:00 PM
Hi Anne-Lise: Thank you much. Good to hear from you.
Date: 10/8/2016 12:58:00 PM
Hello Ralph,this is a beautiful poem I can see the event happening when reading your poem.I like the Vikings to and like to read about them. Well done with your poem.
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