Vigor

In full splendor now
        Dried up, dying tomorrow
                   Laughter and sorrow.










KIM PATRICE NUNEZ
25 February 2015

allusionintrospectionoldwisdomyouthsenryu

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Afolabi Muideen

September 25, 2015 at 11:46 AM

What an insightful write here KIM........A.M.

Bl Devnath

March 13, 2015 at 12:07 PM

Yes, with a few words you have said nicely. You are one of my favorite poetess. Loved always,my lovely friend,bl

Paul Callus

February 28, 2015 at 12:27 PM

You expressed it all in a nut shell, Kim. Very good haiku..#7 I have been through a great part of it:) // paul

Jack Ellison

February 27, 2015 at 9:32 AM

You have just described LIFE!!! Love, Jack xxx

Jack Ellison

February 27, 2015 at 9:43 AM

This site sometimes is a puzzle and annoying but I couldn't live without it... keep trying, my sweet! xxx

Andrea Dietrich

February 26, 2015 at 11:49 PM

I agree with John Wulf here. Powerful one!! Glad that Armand was so kind to you . He went out of his way for so many~~

Steven Hanlon

February 26, 2015 at 5:04 PM

thnx kim i was fishing for that. not big on technical knowledge. better word up

James Fraser

February 26, 2015 at 2:00 PM

So true Kim, wise words indeed, James :)

Rajkumar Thoungamba Meitei

February 26, 2015 at 1:45 PM

Indeed life is a complete package. We only have to acknowledge every bit's importance. Nice work. :) Rajkumar

Demetrios Trifiatis

February 26, 2015 at 11:32 AM

Majestically profound, dear Kim! A seven!

Kelly Deschler

February 25, 2015 at 8:57 PM

Yes, life is so unpredictable and it can change in an instant... You've expressed much in very few words. A beautiful and soulful write, Kim!

Steven Hanlon

February 25, 2015 at 6:11 PM

thanks kim, wow and zen

David Meade

February 25, 2015 at 10:14 AM

the dance between laughter and sorrow -- we need both . . how would we know the difference between the heights and depths without the other . . . may our sorrows rise with laughter of day break. Loved this haiku dearest one!! 7, fav