Vignette-Ode To Joy

Inspired by Friedrich Von Schiller’s poem,
The birth to a tumultuous...orchestral bliss.
The flicks of his wand was the rhythm he heard,
A call for dramatic attention...an extraordinary passage.

As he pulls...he demands...rejecting the three movements,
A dense prelude to what is to come softly emerges.
The lower strings of the orchestra sadly...grope,
And transcend into a new melody...a higher plateau.

Intermingling yet surprisingly...exploding into full orchestra,  
The rhythm leaves his wand...to the choral of ode to joy.
A musical patriot with passionate poise...conducts in silence.

His soul’s final composition permeates from the gestures of his wand.
A deaf body with a mindful soul...fatigued and battered,
Deprived to listen to the thunderous applause...of his life’s magnum opus.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Martin Avatar
April 27, 2009 at 10:23 PM
Beethoven was a masterful composer, nice work.
Lopez Avatar
April 18, 2009 at 12:07 PM
A beautiful descriptive piece, very accurate, best of luck with it.
Williams Avatar
April 18, 2009 at 11:32 AM
Hi Raul... just an outstanding write ! Loved it.... thanks for the comment Raul and please say a big Hi to Michael if you see him. Thanks
Davis Avatar
April 17, 2009 at 11:39 PM
Another masterful write. you have a way to make the poem read well, inscribed with emaculate details.
Smalling Avatar
April 17, 2009 at 1:26 PM
This is the most popular of Beethoven's work in Christendom, and Raul your write on it is so inspirational. Thank you
Curcio Avatar
April 17, 2009 at 12:36 PM
Beetthoven is one of my favorite composers. I saw the 9th one New Years Eve in Lincoln Center - It was thrilling! Well done Raul
Shango Avatar
April 17, 2009 at 6:14 AM
Raul, this poem is worthy to become a seminary lecture ... it is educational, lyrical, imagistic, an awesome tribute to a great musician. Your talent rises to the occassion with inspiration, love and genius ... great write.
Higgins Avatar
April 17, 2009 at 4:04 AM
This is incredible poetry...you have stepped he game with your writing..really enjoyable piece that pulled me into the piece..the words explode..best wishes in the contest.
P. Avatar
April 17, 2009 at 3:40 AM
the last line ... is my fav! i love this writing ... you've captured it all ... a wonderful musical! best wishes ... ~ Arany
Strand Avatar
April 17, 2009 at 2:09 AM
Thank you Raul for supporting my contest Rgds Brian
S Avatar
April 16, 2009 at 11:49 PM
Thank you for your comments. This poem is a great tribute to his genius. Nikhita,
Weber Avatar
April 16, 2009 at 1:24 PM
Historically accurate, Raul, but this one's power resides in something much more palpable. One can almost see the sweat flying off Beethoven's forehead on this as he guides the orchestra using deaf trust. Impressive all around! Warm regards, John.
Richards Avatar
April 16, 2009 at 12:43 PM
This is one of my favorite classical pieces.....it has everything the name implies....Pure Joy!! Has been played at all three of my children's weddings....so reminds me of happiness each time I hear this wonderful music. Your poem is wonderful, Raul...a lovely tribute to the genius of Beethoven! Great job!! ~ Love, Carrie
Harper Avatar
April 16, 2009 at 11:51 AM
WOW...:<) really ..... itz so good i cant find a word for it
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