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Vigil of the Snowy Owl

air reconnaissance
pale assassin in the night
stealthily stalking

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Andrea Dietrich

January 21, 2011 at 9:57 AM

what cool words you used in this very visual haiku!

Christine A Kysely

January 21, 2011 at 9:27 AM

I came back becasue I wanted to give this one a rating!!! I love it!

Christine A Kysely

January 21, 2011 at 9:25 AM

I love your choice of words Stephen!!! Especially the word *Assassin* I love it!!! I just had put together an album of owls on facebook!!! I love them! Christine

Nick Bagnall

January 21, 2011 at 5:52 AM

Interesting, nice structure, not sure I'd have gone with the first line, feels very 'air force' to me, took away some of the beauty. Still owls will be owls, I guess it's intended. I'm off to read the other one now !