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Vigil of the Snowy Owl

air reconnaissance pale assassin in the night stealthily stalking

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Date: 1/21/2011 9:57:00 AM
what cool words you used in this very visual haiku!
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Date: 1/21/2011 9:27:00 AM
I came back becasue I wanted to give this one a rating!!! I love it!
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Date: 1/21/2011 9:25:00 AM
I love your choice of words Stephen!!! Especially the word *Assassin* I love it!!! I just had put together an album of owls on facebook!!! I love them! Christine
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Date: 1/21/2011 5:52:00 AM
Interesting, nice structure, not sure I'd have gone with the first line, feels very 'air force' to me, took away some of the beauty. Still owls will be owls, I guess it's intended. I'm off to read the other one now !
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Date: 1/20/2011 8:27:00 PM
A captivating description of a most beautiful bird, Stephen! I have a statue of a Snow Owl in my living room. Best wishes, Carolyn
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