Views and Comment Blues

views are aplenty 
comments, abysmally few
what am I missing

the words you have read
must not have been amusing
silence confuses

write a few words, dear
let our souls have communion
tell me what you think

Eileen Manassian
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Croft Avatar
August 1, 2024 at 9:35 AM
I'm not a fan of long poems that's why I write a lot of senryu, haiku and Monoku. I do read other people's long poems but sometimes I lose focus on the poem.
Lamoureux Avatar
August 22, 2017 at 9:21 AM
I think for the most part we are aware when we write a quality piece. This one of course is comentary not poetry but it has resulted in conversation. I have witnessed your artistry through the years and you are a truely talented poet. Hugs Rick.
Smith Avatar
August 6, 2017 at 7:23 PM
Eileen, I must confess that I don't comment on every poem I read but I don' t read every poem on the soup. I have this one issue. If I don't like a particular poem, I don't comment. I took the advice literally that the soup is a place for encouragement. I can't be anything if not truthful. I have one poem that has had almost 3000 views. It has about 75 comments. I don't believe all 3000 views liked it. So I'm left to assume a lot didn't. I love your work, keep it up....
Manassian Avatar
August 20, 2017 at 1:27 AM
Thanks, Charlie. I'm glad to read this encouraging comment from you. I try to be as honest as possible in my posts. I only gush on the poems that are really outstanding. If I've spent the time to read a poem that isn't to my liking, I try at least to pick a line or something that has merit. Thanks for the post.
Trifiatis Avatar
August 6, 2017 at 1:08 PM
The spirit of the poet renewed, the heart palpitates, the mind is uplifted! So much pleasure to read and to respond with love to such a friendly calling my dearest, Eileen! Filakia!
Manassian Avatar
August 6, 2017 at 4:38 PM
Thank you, my dear esteemed poet. Always a supreme pleasure to have you visit my work. :) You bring joy. Blessings, dear.
Rodrigues Avatar
August 6, 2017 at 6:02 AM
I feel your pain! Let us not give up! Blessings, Eileen!
Manassian Avatar
August 6, 2017 at 4:39 PM
Thank you, Kim. Things have been rather slow around here. One wonders about the cause. I've been away for some time and will travel again tomorrow for about 10 days. I'll try to get back into the swing of things upon my return.
Sivey Avatar
August 6, 2017 at 4:19 AM
I understand completely Eileen! I ALWAYS comment on the poems I read, just like you said, if you can take the time to read the poem, you can spend an extra minute leaving a comment! And it means so much to that individual to get one (at least I hope so)! I loved what you did here, integrated this Senryu into a comment frenzy, Great Work my friend!
Manassian Avatar
August 6, 2017 at 4:42 PM
You are a kind soul, indeed, Russell. Thank you for making an investment of time to read and to write a comment. One gets discouraged when no one comes by to visit. :) Thanks, dear.
Bauer Avatar
August 5, 2017 at 9:16 PM
hey eileen! i hear you loud and clear and agree with what you're saying but i'm sometimes guilty, too. there are many days i barely have time to get my own poem written and posted and then am too tired to read or comment on other poems. i do try, though, and will make an effort to try harder. i always enjoy your writing...
Manassian Avatar
August 6, 2017 at 3:16 AM
Ilene, you are always a welcome visitor. I know that we all have lives outside of Soup, but every how and again it's good to know your poetry has some sort of effect on others. Thanks for visiting. Hugs, dear one.
Seal Avatar
August 5, 2017 at 5:34 PM
Hello my little Desert Orchid, I must confess, or maybe not a a a, lol. I'll tell you what a lot of the problem is, lack of notifications, they kept the community in touch, gone to pot since PS stopped those. Hope you're keeping well. Take care, Richard.
Manassian Avatar
August 5, 2017 at 7:51 PM
Hello Mr Seal...long time no hear! Glad you popped by. I get notifications when poets post on my poems. It had stopped for a while, but I get them now. I'm the last to complain because I haven't really been "here" for some time, but my last few poems seem to be bunk! Either that...or I've lost friends and popularity....Either that or....Who knows? But to have 60 views and four or five comments seems a little strange. Hope you are keeping well yourself. Thanks for the visit.
Marcum Wong Avatar
August 5, 2017 at 5:11 PM
It is summer in this hemisphere and I have found comments are much less in summer. No reflection on your wonderful poetry Eileen. xxoo : )
Manassian Avatar
August 5, 2017 at 7:55 PM
I myself haven't been as active as I'd like to be. I rarely read a poem and leave it uncommented! (a new word!) I have on occasion, I must admit. But it isn't often. Thanks for the visit, dear. Summer...is for having fun! Isn't poetry fun, though? ;)
Pigeon Tart Avatar
August 5, 2017 at 4:31 PM
I think you make me smile, sometimes make me cry, sometimes incense due anger, usually always affected by your words I look forward to reading what you have penned always. :)
Manassian Avatar
August 5, 2017 at 7:55 PM
Thanks, Maureen. My writes aren't profound, but I do hope that they are worth the time it takes to read them. I appreciate your kindness...always. Hugs
Parker Avatar
August 5, 2017 at 4:13 PM
Ebbs and flows dear poet, no rhyme or reason, no help from the moon, maybe tomorrow replies may come soon, humans are fickle, poets more so, just keep posting, replies may grow...smile my friend at least some have replied
Manassian Avatar
August 5, 2017 at 7:57 PM
A beautiful poem of a post, dear Frederic. :) You bring my heart joy. I will swing by to see you tomorrow. It's late here, but your post makes sense. I will smile...for you! :)
Allison Avatar
August 5, 2017 at 3:40 PM
Well said I'll be honest Eileen I don't think I've seen such apathy on the site as there is at the moment and reads and comments are hard to come by. The interest in my contest has ground to a halt so I have extended the time but I won't be hosting another one for some time if at all. Hugs Jan xx
Manassian Avatar
August 5, 2017 at 7:59 PM
I know, Jan. We commented on this earlier. So..it isn't just that I've sort of become persona non grata around here! I was wondering! Thanks for the visit, sweetie. About the contest...I'm sorry to hear that. Sending love.
Sands Avatar
August 5, 2017 at 2:29 PM
Hi Eileen. I hope people will give feedback to others, yes :)
Manassian Avatar
August 5, 2017 at 8:02 PM
Heidi, thanks for coming round. Yes, it's good when people write at least a little something if they have read. Doesn't need to be much and doesn't need to be dishonest. Just some thought on the content of the poem.
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