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Kid with a wet cloth slopping on the floor:
Water dropping everywhere and trickles free.
Mum comes dashing in the door  -
Can’t you try to make less mess for me?
I have to clean this now and go down on my knee!


Oh mum, please don’t wipe it all away  -
And leave that big wiggly trickle to run.
This is a map of South America I’ve drawn today
And that’s the mighty River Amazon.
In all the world, it’s the biggest one.

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Note

Pretty close to the truth, for as  kid I was a map-o-holic, (still am),
and drew maps freehand whenever I had  the chance.
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Written by Sydney Peck   27 July  2012

Entered in Cyndi MacMillan's  Contest   YOU DO UNDERSTAND!!!!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Ramage Avatar
August 5, 2012 at 2:12 PM
Well done. congratulations on your win, Cyndi, you sure can tell you have children! Lee
Guzzi Avatar
August 2, 2012 at 6:21 PM
Brought a soft smile to my lips...we never know when someones 'fun' is going to be someone elses 'work' Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Johnson Avatar
August 2, 2012 at 4:45 PM
You've drawn on your memory to write a delightful poem. Hope Mom undrstood you just had to do it. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
Onclaud Avatar
August 2, 2012 at 1:12 PM
KC... congrats on your shining win...okay, i am a marathon lady--- catch me if you can, lol.. jkidding.. nice to parry your sweet blows, my friend , hmmpph!..:) huggs!
Brown Avatar
August 2, 2012 at 5:25 AM
Congratulations on your 3rd place win in Cyndi's 'You Do Understand" contest Sidney. Love, Carol
A   Avatar
August 1, 2012 at 11:48 PM
Sydney,, congratulations with your wonderful win in Cyndi's contest... xox~PD
Dietrich Avatar
July 26, 2012 at 3:24 PM
That is funny, Sidney. VERY creative thinking outside the box!!
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