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Ignominious consecrations - Arise. 
Through tainted, synoptic eyes 
With condescending erroneous lies 
Despicable temptations - tease and denies 
My nemesis creation, 
insatiable appetites are no excuse 
Rationalizations 
A pernicious fight, senseless; a tightening noose 

Ridiculous questions, insidious addictions 
Perspectives; painful views of captive 
Suicidal intentions 

Dauntless drug-use & countless late nights 
A senseless tightening noose 
Abject & lost in the rinse 
An insincere truth, a pernicious fight 
Without sense, squandered youth 
Enslaved without any rights. 


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