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Anne Murray did have quite the flurry, voice as a brook without crooks Canadian born, songs of forlorn, beautiful vibes, I subscribed Such singing as a bird, the world has never heard, she splurged “O Little Snow Bird”, in the words I heard, calming of Vietnam O spread your wings and fly away, words of God’s love I heard Mind level love, forever untrue, so what’s new, `Tis festering spew O but little snow bird, an alpine of cleansing snow, God’s Love Spread your wings that brings, renewing, from festered spewing Providing for me a way to go, by a cleansing snow Innocence, a purity, of life’s promising security Some leaders said only fate, this atrocity of hate Maimed, lamed and defamed they came, to claim their bitter fame State side they now abide, holding inside, Our leaders lied Leaving the lamb of their souls in Nam, for uncle Sam Atrocities, of hate, never abate, mind’s sickening fate The Vietnam of late, laid at the mind’s creation of hell’s gate O beauty of little snow birds, spread your wings, fly back this way Cleans again, the glean of mind’s sin called fate, lain at heart’s gate Like an alpine of purity, Love from Anne’s heart was sung Maybe only to ease her own pain, but her timing was plain The answer is blowing in the wings, of even a little snow bird The such of which the mind of itself has never learn or heard All humanity will not learn, but precious few will return By their trust in Love, the snow white Dove, spewed forth from above Anne Murray sang away I know, some of my own heart’s pain Honoring all Vietnam veterans, be you not in fretters From your hearts of security your love is your surety Let your Alpine of pure snow bird, be Love’s word you’ve heard Dane I am sure you’ve at least heard this song that this poem is about. It somehow caused me to think of you, as I was writing it. Therefore I dedicate it to you and all veterans for your service to our country. Sincerely, Love, Moses 12-19-09 johnmosesfreeman@yahoo.com

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Date: 1/18/2010 1:22:00 PM
A very nice tribute veterans and to Ann Murray ,Moses. I recall well that beautiful song!! Glad you liked my dying cat poem. LUv, andrea
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Date: 12/30/2009 7:07:00 PM
Indeed, war is atrocious. But we also need to remember that war starts because some ungodly dictators cause terror, either to their own people and others. But those who fight for the right and freedom for all people, the soldier and the volunteers are very special people. Thank you for writing this great dedication, Moses. Happy new year and thank you for your nice comments on "The Love inside". Love and blessings, Caroline.
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Date: 12/25/2009 10:31:00 PM
Wonderful poem Moses. Thanks for sharing this great write. I'm going to pass this along to the Vietnam vets in my life. Very moving piece. Thank you for your note of congrats on my making the first cut in the contest. Tamra
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Date: 12/22/2009 5:10:00 AM
Wonderful write here Moses...Nam was bad...War is bad... But you penned a wonderful piece here...To my Favs. Thanks...Taz
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Date: 12/19/2009 9:47:00 PM
Hi John, this is a beautiful dedication to our veterans. Very heartfelt and moving. Anne Murray is a geat country music singer. Love her songs. Bless your heart for writing this. Take care John, Merry Christmas! Love Light Patty
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Date: 12/19/2009 4:01:00 PM
Beautiful dedication.. beautiful poetry.. beautiful song... Anne Murray was tops whatever she sang as Dane Ann is tops in whatever she writes as well as u Moses... this is so touching ..so moving.. so stirring.. so intense... just so enjoyed.... blessings... luv... happy and holy holidays... snow falling here 15 inches so far... Linda-Marie ... "Sweetheart" of P.S.
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Date: 12/19/2009 3:56:00 PM
Great tribute and that song was awesome.
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Date: 12/19/2009 2:37:00 PM
Love your poem and love Anne Murray and it's such a beautiful dedication....Marty
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Date: 12/19/2009 12:37:00 PM
Thank you very much, Moses. This poem is beautiful. I am glad that you thought of me when you wrote it. God works in mysterious and wonderful ways. I think that we are experiencing a "Godly connection." Not just with our beliefs. Yesterday, my neighbor who recently lost her husband came over. She likes to sing. Anne Murray is one of my favorite vocalists. So, just yesterday, her words filled a small room in a small home in the woods. And, now, Moses, your write... Smiles. Love, Dane
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Date: 12/19/2009 11:18:00 AM
Ann Murray is one of my favorites. I didn't know that she went to entertain the vets. Keep the magical and creative pen flowing. Sara soup mail
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Date: 12/19/2009 11:08:00 AM
yes, a deep poem filled with so much emotion and passion, enjoyed this and have a great day.
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Date: 12/19/2009 10:16:00 AM
God bless you for this amazing dedication, John. I'm sure Dane Ann will appreciate your spiritual sentiments. I always did love the Anne Murray song, but now it will hold new meaning for me. Your friendship is a priceless treasure! Much love, Carolyn
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