Video Games Vs Real Life: Driving

Video Games VS Real Life: Driving
     By Dane Smith-Johnsen

(The Video Game)
There he was on the racetrack.
Eager!  Darting in and out.
Slipping, sliding, glancing back
Boisterous screams and driving dreams -

Speed: 190 on the turn
Devil daring, no concern,
Winning was his deepest yearn.
Screeching tires.  Rubber burned!

Adrenalin: wild!  Swelling. 
Checkered flag showing, eyes gleamed.
The finish line, fans yelling,
Hit the gas, racecar unseen!

“Flying”, wildly waving arms,
“X’s” pop up on the screen.
Bells and buzzers sound alarms.
Crash!!!  Game over.  Sweet machine!

(Real Live Driving)
There he was on the roadway.
Other drivers round about.
Clearly in a rush that day,
So, he darted in and out.

Speeding: 90 on the curve.
Almost “flying” memories churned.
Suddenly, he had to swerve.
Leaving tracks of rubber burned!

Adrenalin rising… loft-
Speeding cab with people dear,
All, too soon he cut them off.
Hit the gas; this pass he’d clear.

But in his rearview mirror,
Upside down, a rolling cab.
Police sirens blared nearer.
Life over:  His freedom nabbed.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Brown Avatar
August 17, 2009 at 5:30 AM
Good morning Dane Ann. Thank you for sharing your poetry with us today. I truly enjoyed reading it. Love, Carol
Freeman Avatar
August 16, 2009 at 1:58 PM
A very good narrative, of fantasy verses reality, something to think about. Good rhyming also,brilliant, Dane. Sincerely, love Moses
Devonshire Avatar
August 16, 2009 at 1:24 PM
A chilling ending. I do fear young people pick up some unhealthy habits from video games and your poem struck a chord for me. How will this "racer" be able to live with the fact that he killed others with his own recklessness. This is the kind of thing that can haunt a person forever. Excellent writing and compelling topic! Love you, Carolyn
Fraser Avatar
August 16, 2009 at 9:48 AM
Dane Ann, either version captures me, clever to compare a game version to reality>>James
Fraser Avatar
August 16, 2009 at 6:43 AM
Dane Ann, excellently written. I am picturing you on the Wi here, being inspired for your write. What a joy to read>>James
Kelly Avatar
August 16, 2009 at 6:33 AM
Great cal , DAS-J . It is real life and life for real ......
Kendrick Avatar
August 16, 2009 at 5:04 AM
Very well written verse about life today. I never thought about youth learning how to drive from a video game. Could that be the reason for the way our Interstates,etc. are these days. Keep writing. Sara
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