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Video Games Played

Eyes glued to screen Ignore homework of teacher Down load video game Some rich becomes a tycoon Cost younger generation For the Video Game Played contest of Yasmin Khan

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Audrey Haick

Date: 1/6/2013 12:06:00 AM

Ha Ha! Sometimes I wonder if our kids know something we don't...I can't figure out why they prefer to stay indoors for hours instead of being out in the sunshine...but, such are the times we're living in, Mohammed...and the pied piper plays on! Happy New Year to you a nd yours, my friend. Love, Annalise

Mohammad Yamin
Date: 1/6/2013 9:57:00 AM

I am glad you appreciate the point I have made in my poem. They prefer to stay indoors to unwittingly waste their time in a worthless activity and as you have rightly said, the pied piper plays on. What a pity! Love.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/5/2013 11:24:00 AM

Mohammad, are you not getting my comments to you here in your box? I keep telling you that I am not getting any friend requests from you at FB. I have no idea why I can't receive them. I have told you three times now. I don't know what else to say!! Anyway, I appreciate your comments on my poetry. I'm leaving to see a movie. I'll try to see your poetry later.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/4/2013 8:41:00 PM

Good one!

Mohammad Yamin
Date: 1/5/2013 10:31:00 AM

Thanks Andrea. Did you respond to my freind request at the facebook

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/4/2013 12:48:00 PM

Always homework first! - But I see that the temptation is great ..... lol. - Well done for the contest, good luck Mohammad. xoxo / / Anne-Lise :)

Mohammad Yamin
Date: 1/5/2013 10:08:00 AM

Thanks for your good wishes Anne. You are right about temptation being great. It over rides ambition and that is the negative and ruinous side of Video Games. God save our children.

Kash Poet

Date: 1/4/2013 12:41:00 PM

Very nice Tanka here.Enjoyed the read.Best wishes.

Mohammad Yamin
Date: 1/5/2013 9:29:00 AM

Thanks Kash for your encouraging comments.