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Victual Riddle

Drizzling down the sides of the pound, the cherry, and the sweet juice... mine lips again burst with joyful sounds smack smack smack

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John Loving Iii

Date: 5/1/2010 12:34:00 PM

a whole pound?! and you don't have to be so formal john will do just fine. jhl

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

Date: 4/29/2010 9:04:00 PM

Sounds you are eating a praline with a cherry and sweet juice inside. Hmm, sounds good to me. :) Caroline.

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 4/29/2010 7:55:00 AM

You made me chuckle James,here i cnt see a pound cake,i can see a very sensual tasty everything except cake. .and with sound,thats a very smacky one,lol-great funny sweet write-Charma.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/28/2010 2:31:00 PM

well, I am taking it as pound CAKE and that 's all there is to it! Glad you thought you could read my caterpillar poem to Noah. LUv, andrea

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 4/27/2010 12:56:00 PM

naughty and nice, enjoyed