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Victual Riddle

Drizzling down
the sides of the pound,
the cherry,
and the sweet juice...

mine lips again
burst with 
joyful sounds

smack
smack
smack

foodepulaeryu

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John Loving Iii

May 1, 2010 at 12:34 PM

a whole pound?! and you don't have to be so formal john will do just fine. jhl

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

April 29, 2010 at 9:04 PM

Sounds you are eating a praline with a cherry and sweet juice inside. Hmm, sounds good to me. :) Caroline.

Charmaine Chircop

April 29, 2010 at 7:55 AM

You made me chuckle James,here i cnt see a pound cake,i can see a very sensual tasty everything except cake. .and with sound,thats a very smacky one,lol-great funny sweet write-Charma.