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Victory in the valley

I've slain the giant bunny with its bones, I'll build my bed with its soft brown fur, I'll make a hat to warm my giant balding head I'll fry its legs and liver I'll spread its heart on toast and with its brains, I'll make a soup that's the part I like the most

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Date: 4/4/2024 7:39:00 PM
Ha ha! Very funny. I'm very much into rhyming poetry. Can I be cheeky enough to suggest that the rhythm, which is almost perfect, would be perfect with the removal of the word giant. That word interrupts the flow. I'm not trying to be critical. It's just a suggestion. I do like the poem. Wazza
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Date: 4/6/2024 11:51:00 AM
How do you make a bed with the bones of an ordinary rabbit? The poem is about a giant killing a giant rabbit. lol.
Date: 3/31/2024 12:57:00 PM
Very well written enjoyed reading your work here.
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Date: 4/1/2024 1:44:00 AM
Hi, Yolanda, Thank you for the read. I'm happy you enjoyed the poem. Hope you have a great Easter. Cheers.

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