Victory in the valley


I've slain the giant bunny
with its bones, I'll build my bed
with its soft brown fur, 
I'll make a hat to warm
my giant balding head
I'll fry its legs and liver
I'll spread its heart on toast
and with its brains, I'll make a soup  
that's the part I like the most
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Cox Avatar
April 4, 2024 at 7:39 PM
Ha ha! Very funny. I'm very much into rhyming poetry. Can I be cheeky enough to suggest that the rhythm, which is almost perfect, would be perfect with the removal of the word giant. That word interrupts the flow. I'm not trying to be critical. It's just a suggestion. I do like the poem. Wazza
Desk Avatar
April 6, 2024 at 11:51 AM
How do you make a bed with the bones of an ordinary rabbit? The poem is about a giant killing a giant rabbit. lol.
Nicholsen Avatar
March 31, 2024 at 12:57 PM
Very well written enjoyed reading your work here.
Desk Avatar
April 1, 2024 at 1:44 AM
Hi, Yolanda, Thank you for the read. I'm happy you enjoyed the poem. Hope you have a great Easter. Cheers.
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