Richard Palmer Poet Rhyme

Victory

GOD,some laugh,some jeer,
But I know YOU are always near,
I walk this road called life,without fear,
Looking around does anyone really care,
Every love has it's share of hate,
Every weakness has a tot of faith,
Some will do anything to win,
Hurting others while they grin,
Be wise check yourself from deep within,
You can be victorious without a sin,
Hold GOD hands through thick and thin,
And your VICTORY will be EVERLASTING,,,,,,

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Estela Canama June 7, 2014 at 2:17 AM This piece is so overwhelming! Keep on believing that God will always be there... Richard Palmer June 7, 2014 at 12:11 PM HE will be ,thank you Estela

Keith O.J. Hunt May 7, 2014 at 1:40 PM ' You can be victorious without a sin ' Bravo Richard! Richard Palmer May 7, 2014 at 2:52 PM thank you Keith,,that line grabbed you lol

Weston Gregory April 20, 2014 at 8:38 AM Paul this is a real inspirational piece its well worth to know we are not alone Richard Palmer April 20, 2014 at 10:20 AM thank you Weston

Seosamh De Burca November 27, 2013 at 4:24 PM As stated below a very inspirational poem. Really enjoyed reading your poems today. Richard Palmer April 4, 2014 at 1:13 PM thank you Seosamh,2013 was a year of deep thoughts,got me in a spiritual frame of mind

Jasonpoet Boyd June 18, 2013 at 7:54 PM Very inspiring and down to earth and real. Thank you Richard Palmer July 23, 2013 at 1:48 PM thanks Bobb

Annie Lander May 4, 2013 at 6:28 AM Amen, and eyeopener this one. blessed annie Richard Palmer July 23, 2013 at 1:41 PM thanks Annie,blessed love

Kenisha Shines April 21, 2013 at 1:13 AM veryyyyyyyyy beautiful poem .have a great weekend . Richard Palmer July 23, 2013 at 1:33 PM Thank you Kenisha,same to you oxox

Patrick Nigros April 14, 2013 at 10:59 AM Being top of his class but realising-no one to celebrate his victory because he celebrated their downfall on his way to the top. Nice poem sir Richard Palmer July 23, 2013 at 1:40 PM thank you Patrick,so true

Jacqueline R. Mendoza April 13, 2013 at 2:55 PM Lord Eternal God cares or even the one that truly loves you. In weakness, one needs to have faith as it's the evidence of the unseen and it will bloom to hope then perseverance finally success. Check out my Venial and Mortal sin. One cannot have any sin only Father Christ. You really should checkout mine and I'll check yours, thanks Richard Palmer April 23, 2013 at 8:04 AM thanks for your positive comment,will be checking out your work,oxox Richie

Ndaba Sibanda April 13, 2013 at 5:10 AM Yes, holding God`s hands through thick and thin is a wise thing because He does not abandon us. Good message! Richard Palmer April 23, 2013 at 8:02 AM thanks Ndaba,HE is always there for who needs HIM

Ndaba Sibanda April 12, 2013 at 3:07 PM Yes, God is always good. An important piece you have shared with us. Richard Palmer April 21, 2013 at 2:24 PM Yes HE is Ndaba,thanks much

Ale A A April 11, 2013 at 6:03 PM Richard this poem was rich in its message. Great work. Richard Palmer April 21, 2013 at 2:23 PM thanks Abigale,honored

Carol Eastman April 10, 2013 at 12:55 PM A great poem... and it flowed exceptionally well, too. Richard Palmer April 19, 2013 at 8:43 AM thanks Carol,so do yours

Lucilla Carrillo April 10, 2013 at 7:13 AM Richard; This is beautiful and very good advice. God never leaves us. Thanks for sharing..... Lucilla Richard Palmer April 19, 2013 at 8:42 AM No HE never,thanks Lucilla

Christine Phillips April 9, 2013 at 12:38 PM Nice rhyme well done brother Richard Richard Palmer April 16, 2013 at 6:47 AM and message too,lol,thanks sister Christine

Therese Bacha April 8, 2013 at 3:41 PM Hi Richard, happy you are back, i love it, although there is some sadness. Love Terry xoxo a 7 >> Richard Palmer April 16, 2013 at 6:45 AM thanks Terry,happy to be back oxox,7 wow

Toquyen Harrell April 7, 2013 at 12:52 PM Yes. Great words, Richard. Always walk with Him. Awesome! Richard Palmer April 15, 2013 at 5:18 PM thank you T,always girl,always oxox

Poet Destroyer A April 7, 2013 at 11:59 AM Richard, thank you for the uplifting thoughts... love the free feeling of being victorious without sin... always~ Linda Richard Palmer April 15, 2013 at 4:10 PM lol love the feeling too,thanks Linda

Eileen Manassian April 7, 2013 at 11:42 AM Richard!!! This is lovely! You've been away for some time. Glad you are back. This is so thought provoking. We can only be victorious in Him. He covers us with His righteousness and makes us appear before God...sinless. :) Praise God! Richard Palmer April 15, 2013 at 3:58 PM thank you Eileen,be bless

Anne-Lise Andresen April 7, 2013 at 8:15 AM - thanks for you posted a beautiful poem today Richard, I'm glad that you shared it with me. - Have a nice Sunday .... hope the sun shines on you and yours. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :) Richard Palmer April 15, 2013 at 3:57 PM same to you and yours,oxox Anne