Victory

GOD,some laugh,some jeer, But I know YOU are always near, I walk this road called life,without fear, Looking around does anyone really care, Every love has it's share of hate, Every weakness has a tot of faith, Some will do anything to win, Hurting others while they grin, Be wise check yourself from deep within, You can be victorious without a sin, Hold GOD hands through thick and thin, And your VICTORY will be EVERLASTING,,,,,,

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Estela Canama

Date: 6/7/2014 2:17:00 AM

This piece is so overwhelming! Keep on believing that God will always be there...

Richard Palmer
Date: 6/7/2014 12:11:00 PM

HE will be ,thank you Estela

Keith O.J. Hunt

Date: 5/7/2014 1:40:00 PM

' You can be victorious without a sin ' Bravo Richard!

Richard Palmer
Date: 5/7/2014 2:52:00 PM

thank you Keith,,that line grabbed you lol

Weston Gregory

Date: 4/20/2014 8:38:00 AM

Paul this is a real inspirational piece its well worth to know we are not alone

Richard Palmer
Date: 4/20/2014 10:20:00 AM

thank you Weston

Seosamh De Burca

Date: 11/27/2013 4:24:00 PM

As stated below a very inspirational poem. Really enjoyed reading your poems today.

Richard Palmer
Date: 4/4/2014 1:13:00 PM

thank you Seosamh,2013 was a year of deep thoughts,got me in a spiritual frame of mind

Jasonpoet Boyd

Date: 6/18/2013 7:54:00 PM

Very inspiring and down to earth and real. Thank you

Richard Palmer
Date: 7/23/2013 1:48:00 PM

thanks Bobb

Annie Lander

Date: 5/4/2013 6:28:00 AM

Amen, and eyeopener this one. blessed annie

Richard Palmer
Date: 7/23/2013 1:41:00 PM

thanks Annie,blessed love

Kenisha Shines

Date: 4/21/2013 1:13:00 AM

veryyyyyyyyy beautiful poem .have a great weekend .

Richard Palmer
Date: 7/23/2013 1:33:00 PM

Thank you Kenisha,same to you oxox

Patrick Nigros

Date: 4/14/2013 10:59:00 AM

Being top of his class but realising-no one to celebrate his victory because he celebrated their downfall on his way to the top. Nice poem sir

Richard Palmer
Date: 7/23/2013 1:40:00 PM

thank you Patrick,so true

Jacqueline R. Mendoza

Date: 4/13/2013 2:55:00 PM

Lord Eternal God cares or even the one that truly loves you. In weakness, one needs to have faith as it's the evidence of the unseen and it will bloom to hope then perseverance finally success. Check out my Venial and Mortal sin. One cannot have any sin only Father Christ. You really should checkout mine and I'll check yours, thanks

Richard Palmer
Date: 4/23/2013 8:04:00 AM

thanks for your positive comment,will be checking out your work,oxox Richie

Ndaba Sibanda

Date: 4/13/2013 5:10:00 AM

Yes, holding God`s hands through thick and thin is a wise thing because He does not abandon us. Good message!

Richard Palmer
Date: 4/23/2013 8:02:00 AM

thanks Ndaba,HE is always there for who needs HIM

Ndaba Sibanda

Date: 4/12/2013 3:07:00 PM

Yes, God is always good. An important piece you have shared with us.

Richard Palmer
Date: 4/21/2013 2:24:00 PM

Yes HE is Ndaba,thanks much

Ale A A

Date: 4/11/2013 6:03:00 PM

Richard this poem was rich in its message. Great work.

Richard Palmer
Date: 4/21/2013 2:23:00 PM

thanks Abigale,honored

Carol Eastman

Date: 4/10/2013 12:55:00 PM

A great poem... and it flowed exceptionally well, too.

Richard Palmer
Date: 4/19/2013 8:43:00 AM

thanks Carol,so do yours

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 4/10/2013 7:13:00 AM

Richard; This is beautiful and very good advice. God never leaves us. Thanks for sharing..... Lucilla

Richard Palmer
Date: 4/19/2013 8:42:00 AM

No HE never,thanks Lucilla

Christine Phillips

Date: 4/9/2013 12:38:00 PM

Nice rhyme well done brother Richard

Richard Palmer
Date: 4/16/2013 6:47:00 AM

and message too,lol,thanks sister Christine

Therese Bacha

Date: 4/8/2013 3:41:00 PM

Hi Richard, happy you are back, i love it, although there is some sadness. Love Terry xoxo a 7 >>

Richard Palmer
Date: 4/16/2013 6:45:00 AM

thanks Terry,happy to be back oxox,7 wow

Toquyen Harrell

Date: 4/7/2013 12:52:00 PM

Yes. Great words, Richard. Always walk with Him. Awesome!

Richard Palmer
Date: 4/15/2013 5:18:00 PM

thank you T,always girl,always oxox

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/7/2013 11:59:00 AM

Richard, thank you for the uplifting thoughts... love the free feeling of being victorious without sin... always~ Linda

Richard Palmer
Date: 4/15/2013 4:10:00 PM

lol love the feeling too,thanks Linda

Eileen Manassian

Date: 4/7/2013 11:42:00 AM

Richard!!! This is lovely! You've been away for some time. Glad you are back. This is so thought provoking. We can only be victorious in Him. He covers us with His righteousness and makes us appear before God...sinless. :) Praise God!

Richard Palmer
Date: 4/15/2013 3:58:00 PM

thank you Eileen,be bless

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/7/2013 8:15:00 AM

- thanks for you posted a beautiful poem today Richard, I'm glad that you shared it with me. - Have a nice Sunday .... hope the sun shines on you and yours. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Richard Palmer
Date: 4/15/2013 3:57:00 PM

same to you and yours,oxox Anne