Victory

Visiting my doorstep
Victory standing tall
Vigilant its journey
Voices cheering me on
Vibration positive
Vested glorious stand
Victory, oh so sweet

06.05.2021
Sponsor: Kim Merryman
Contest: Pleiades V
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Dietrich Avatar
May 9, 2021 at 4:43 PM
Congrats for your win, Carol. Victory!
Mitra Avatar
May 9, 2021 at 6:33 PM
Thank you dear Andrea....much love :)
Andresen Avatar
May 8, 2021 at 12:03 PM
- Congratulations on your win in the contest, Carol :) - Victory, oh so sweet :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Mitra Avatar
May 8, 2021 at 6:12 PM
Thank you dear Anne-Lise....Yes Victory is indeed sweet...Take care much love :)
Merryman Avatar
May 8, 2021 at 8:08 AM
Carol, I like how you built up the anticipation of victory to the very last line. Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M
Mitra Avatar
May 9, 2021 at 6:33 PM
Thank you dear Kim....much love :)
Seeker Avatar
May 5, 2021 at 11:41 PM
May v 4 victory be yours!
Mitra Avatar
May 6, 2021 at 1:39 AM
So sweet....Thank you :)
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