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VICTORIAN VIRTUE Victorian virtue left bare - ivory shoulders, pulsating neck i hear the tinkle of chimes and the brisk flapping of his cape his sultry voice, rich and romantic, hypnotic suddenly the dagger of teeth sink into the darkest carafe of my neck warning unheeded i play back how i laughed so hard at the spooky report “Wear garlic, ye virgins!” now my rose perfume scents the hospital room where he returns for moonshine elixir as i die a slow death and the centuries pass and i sink my teeth into my victims’ weep my boots carry their ashes the brisk wind sweeps them away Date: 12/18/2018 Contest Name: Give Me Goosebumps Poetry Contest Sponsor: Nina Parmenter

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Date: 12/21/2018 6:24:00 PM
wow, Kim, I love this. BIG congrats for your win.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/21/2018 6:26:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea! :)
Date: 12/21/2018 2:08:00 PM
I'm back to say CONGRATS! Janice
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/21/2018 2:09:00 PM
Thank you, my friend!
Date: 12/21/2018 1:35:00 PM
The terror of the vampire is skillfully exposed here, Kim. And to think she goes on to claim victims of her own! Congratulations on your win. Best wishes, Carolyn
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/21/2018 2:09:00 PM
Thank you, Carolyn!
Date: 12/21/2018 10:13:00 AM
Kim, congrats on your win for this eerie vampire verse. John
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/21/2018 11:04:00 AM
Thank you, John!
Date: 12/21/2018 10:04:00 AM
Nothing like a good vampire poem to send chills up and down my spine. Good one, Kim. Congrats on your win.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/21/2018 11:04:00 AM
Thank you, Line!
Date: 12/17/2018 3:43:00 AM
If you think I will ever get near the scent of roses again, you are wrong, Kim. Dead wrong.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/17/2018 9:40:00 AM
LOL!
Date: 12/17/2018 2:59:00 AM
I swear I will never look at a rose perfume bottle quite the same way. You had me uneasy here. goosebumps alright ! winning wishes. Kim, xo
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/17/2018 9:39:00 AM
Thanks, Pixie!
Date: 12/16/2018 9:35:00 PM
Goosebumps--yes, indeed, Kim Janice
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/16/2018 10:10:00 PM
Thank you, Janice!

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