Victorian Virtue

VICTORIAN VIRTUE

Victorian virtue left bare -
ivory shoulders, pulsating neck

i hear the tinkle of chimes
and the brisk flapping of his cape

his sultry voice, rich and romantic,
hypnotic

suddenly the dagger of teeth
sink

into the darkest carafe of my neck
warning unheeded

i play back how i laughed so hard
at the spooky report

“Wear garlic, ye virgins!”
now my rose perfume

scents the hospital room
where he returns for moonshine elixir

as i die a slow death
and the centuries pass

and i sink my teeth
into my victims’ weep

my boots carry their ashes
the brisk wind sweeps them away

Date: 12/18/2018


Contest Name: Give Me Goosebumps Poetry Contest


Sponsor: Nina Parmenter
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018


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Date: 12/21/2018 6:24:00 PM
wow, Kim, I love this. BIG congrats for your win.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/21/2018 6:26:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea! :)
Date: 12/21/2018 2:08:00 PM
I'm back to say CONGRATS! Janice
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/21/2018 2:09:00 PM
Thank you, my friend!
Date: 12/21/2018 1:35:00 PM
The terror of the vampire is skillfully exposed here, Kim. And to think she goes on to claim victims of her own! Congratulations on your win. Best wishes, Carolyn
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/21/2018 2:09:00 PM
Thank you, Carolyn!
Date: 12/21/2018 10:13:00 AM
Kim, congrats on your win for this eerie vampire verse. John
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/21/2018 11:04:00 AM
Thank you, John!
Date: 12/21/2018 10:04:00 AM
Nothing like a good vampire poem to send chills up and down my spine. Good one, Kim. Congrats on your win.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/21/2018 11:04:00 AM
Thank you, Line!
Date: 12/17/2018 3:43:00 AM
If you think I will ever get near the scent of roses again, you are wrong, Kim. Dead wrong.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/17/2018 9:40:00 AM
LOL!
Date: 12/17/2018 2:59:00 AM
I swear I will never look at a rose perfume bottle quite the same way. You had me uneasy here. goosebumps alright ! winning wishes. Kim, xo
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/17/2018 9:39:00 AM
Thanks, Pixie!
Date: 12/16/2018 9:35:00 PM
Goosebumps--yes, indeed, Kim Janice
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/16/2018 10:10:00 PM
Thank you, Janice!
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