Victorian Virtue

VICTORIAN VIRTUE

Victorian virtue left bare -
ivory shoulders, pulsating neck

i hear the tinkle of chimes
and the brisk flapping of his cape

his sultry voice, rich and romantic,
hypnotic

suddenly the dagger of teeth
sink

into the darkest carafe of my neck
warning unheeded

i play back how i laughed so hard
at the spooky report

“Wear garlic, ye virgins!”
now my rose perfume

scents the hospital room
where he returns for moonshine elixir

as i die a slow death
and the centuries pass

and i sink my teeth
into my victims’ weep

my boots carry their ashes
the brisk wind sweeps them away

Date: 12/18/2018


Contest Name: Give Me Goosebumps Poetry Contest


Sponsor: Nina Parmenter
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Dietrich Avatar
December 21, 2018 at 6:24 PM
wow, Kim, I love this. BIG congrats for your win.
Rodrigues Avatar
December 21, 2018 at 6:26 PM
Thank you, Andrea! :)
Canerdy Avatar
December 21, 2018 at 2:08 PM
I'm back to say CONGRATS! Janice
Rodrigues Avatar
December 21, 2018 at 2:09 PM
Thank you, my friend!
Devonshire Avatar
December 21, 2018 at 1:35 PM
The terror of the vampire is skillfully exposed here, Kim. And to think she goes on to claim victims of her own! Congratulations on your win. Best wishes, Carolyn
Rodrigues Avatar
December 21, 2018 at 2:09 PM
Thank you, Carolyn!
Gondolf Avatar
December 21, 2018 at 10:13 AM
Kim, congrats on your win for this eerie vampire verse. John
Rodrigues Avatar
December 21, 2018 at 11:04 AM
Thank you, John!
Gauthier Avatar
December 21, 2018 at 10:04 AM
Nothing like a good vampire poem to send chills up and down my spine. Good one, Kim. Congrats on your win.
Rodrigues Avatar
December 21, 2018 at 11:04 AM
Thank you, Line!
Krutsinger Avatar
December 17, 2018 at 3:43 AM
If you think I will ever get near the scent of roses again, you are wrong, Kim. Dead wrong.
Rodrigues Avatar
December 17, 2018 at 9:40 AM
LOL!
Rose  Avatar
December 17, 2018 at 2:59 AM
I swear I will never look at a rose perfume bottle quite the same way. You had me uneasy here. goosebumps alright ! winning wishes. Kim, xo
Rodrigues Avatar
December 17, 2018 at 9:39 AM
Thanks, Pixie!
Canerdy Avatar
December 16, 2018 at 9:35 PM
Goosebumps--yes, indeed, Kim Janice
Rodrigues Avatar
December 16, 2018 at 10:10 PM
Thank you, Janice!
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