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Victorian Inn Ii

After hearing the sea captain, I feel afraid, not sure what to do I tell myself to get a grip, he is merely a ghost I can see through As I sit up, I notice a large old oil painting displayed on the far wall I gasp, the woman in the painting looks just like me, hair and all The sea captain tells me he has been waiting here a hundred years To be reunited with his long-lost love, as his face is visibly wet with tears He tells me years ago I was here in this house while he was out to sea I am both shocked and intrigued as I start to feel a strange familiarity 9/2/19 Contest: Writing Challenge 1, September 2019 - Eight Line Form Sponsor: Dear Heart - Wiishkobi Ode

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Date: 9/16/2019 11:56:00 AM
Tania congratulations on your win in my writing challenge.
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 9/16/2019 4:17:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 9/12/2019 12:52:00 PM
- Tania, congratulations on your winning poem :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 9/12/2019 4:23:00 PM
Thank you Anne-Lise! :) hugs
Date: 9/10/2019 9:29:00 PM
very interesting unique poem great rhyming and interesting story, left wondering what happened?
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 9/11/2019 4:48:00 AM
Thank you Linda, stay tuned for part 3!
Date: 9/10/2019 5:06:00 PM
oooh, great how you ended with the beginning of that familiar feeling!! Congrats on your win, Tania
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 9/10/2019 5:59:00 PM
Thank you Andrea! :)
Date: 9/3/2019 7:40:00 AM
Very cool Tania. I enjoyed this little mystery a lot. You are very good at this. Best wishes in the contest
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 9/3/2019 4:42:00 PM
Thank you for your nice comments and visit Chris, it is appreciated! :)
Date: 9/3/2019 2:34:00 AM
Love nautical verses Tania, love the ghostly touch to it. Tom
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 9/3/2019 4:35:00 AM
Thank you Tom! :)

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