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Victoria

I'll make my apologies and ill make them for two If i could paint you a picture the colour would be blue I looked into the mirror and all i could see Was a bitter old twisted version of me Put the children to bed and send out for Tea I am calling an end to our Love , it is Dead Take the phone off the hook and throw the sheets from the bed Wash them on spin and bleach out her scent Call all the classifieds I've a room up for rent I have loathed you and loved you in equal amounts but for all your faults on this you can count On reflection my dear it was always my fault Forgive me my action's ,my malice , my spite May you smile at another and give them your Love For you were sent from God above Goodbye God bless my lover my friend I'm sorry i ruined our fairy tale End

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 11/9/2009 4:04:00 PM
I really like this, the words flow very well and you have some really good ideas. For some reason when I read your stuff, I find myself back in the victorian ages, I don't know why. LOL really good job!
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Date: 10/8/2009 8:44:00 AM
It is hard facing something when we realize it was at least part our facult but we become a better and stronger person from the lessons learned. Keep writing. Sara
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