Victoria

I'll make my apologies and ill make them for two
If i could paint you a picture the colour would be blue
I looked into the mirror and all i could see 
Was a bitter old twisted version of me
Put the children to bed and send out for Tea 
I am calling an end to our Love , it is Dead
Take the phone off the hook and throw the sheets from the bed
Wash them on spin and bleach out her scent
Call all the classifieds I've a room up for rent
I have loathed you and loved you in equal amounts
but for all your faults on this you can count
On reflection my dear it was always my fault
Forgive me my action's ,my malice , my spite
May you smile at another and give them your Love
For you were sent from God above
Goodbye God bless my lover my friend
I'm sorry i ruined our fairy tale End
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Groves Avatar
November 9, 2009 at 4:04 PM
I really like this, the words flow very well and you have some really good ideas. For some reason when I read your stuff, I find myself back in the victorian ages, I don't know why. LOL really good job!
Kendrick Avatar
October 8, 2009 at 8:44 AM
It is hard facing something when we realize it was at least part our facult but we become a better and stronger person from the lessons learned. Keep writing. Sara
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