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Vicissitudes Into Light


"Vicissitudes into Light"



You are another world
away from me
stretching far from 
his insanity

Diving into a new 
Light 
Dimensions that 
are the truest You

From the dark deep 
Ocean of sinking blue
Reach on the wave
in my wake 
I gift to You

You are stronger
than all of his 
bluest blues
broken egg shells
ladders in stockings

hyena in the corner little
Jack now crying 
in his new freedom zoo

no ladder required

transparent 
You have grown
wings to fly

Open Sky 
for You

Little sister
Vicissitudes into Light 

Open Sky
for You

Into day
Escape dark night

(LadyLabyrinth/2019)
gvlm



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Gregory Richard Barden

July 14, 2019 at 12:17 AM

This is wonderfully layered and so sublimely phrased ... you punch with your bare fist and yet deliver the blows without bruising. Something for everyone here, (if they look closely), and I am very taken with your honesty and keen edge. I don't get much time to read of late, but I must make more effort to peruse your page - wonderful stuff! Blessings! (Fav-ing this)

Lady Labyrinth

July 19, 2019 at 8:14 PM

I've come to the realisation, I prefer honesty and edge. Thanks Greg.

Robert Lindley

May 21, 2019 at 5:41 AM

Closing verse says so very much. ""Into day Escape dark night"", yes-- for a better life one must walk out of the dark. Step into sunshine, flowering fields , inspiring promise of divinely crafted gifts that await. Very powerful piece you have created my friend. A fav.. please keep thy pen active..

Lady Labyrinth

May 24, 2019 at 10:29 AM

Thank you for your kind comment Robert. I will continue to write until that point where I can't. :)

Caren Krutsinger

May 20, 2019 at 1:56 AM

" you are stronger than all his bluest blues broken egg shells ladders in stockings: Wow! Wow! So powerfully done, my friend. WOW

Lady Labyrinth

May 20, 2019 at 3:50 AM

There is true power in words, if placed in the puzzle, the right way Krutsinger. And this is a strong talent that you possess. It would be remiss of me to not say, while I do not comment on all poems - I took the time to read the entire front page of your poetry the other night. I have an affinity with writers who are exceptionally left of centre and highly creative. Some of your most recent poetry has an inspirational strength in the story and in the message. So thank you. I mentioned last year, while writing under my own name, my thoughts on your writing and I stand by them. So thank you for your inspiring stories. The "Ladder" poem you wrote should place No. 1, in my humble opinion. Leanne (smiling).