Vicissitudes Into Light

"Vicissitudes into Light"
You are another world away from me stretching far from his insanity Diving into a new Light Dimensions that are the truest You From the dark deep Ocean of sinking blue Reach on the wave in my wake I gift to You You are stronger than all of his bluest blues broken egg shells ladders in stockings hyena in the corner little Jack now crying in his new freedom zoo no ladder required transparent You have grown wings to fly Open Sky for You Little sister Vicissitudes into Light Open Sky for You Into day Escape dark night (LadyLabyrinth/2019) gvlm
https://youtu.be/mYbZw04ba78 bjork: tabula raisa

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Date: 7/14/2019 12:17:00 AM
This is wonderfully layered and so sublimely phrased ... you punch with your bare fist and yet deliver the blows without bruising. Something for everyone here, (if they look closely), and I am very taken with your honesty and keen edge. I don't get much time to read of late, but I must make more effort to peruse your page - wonderful stuff! Blessings! (Fav-ing this)
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 7/19/2019 8:14:00 PM
I've come to the realisation, I prefer honesty and edge. Thanks Greg.
Date: 5/21/2019 5:41:00 AM
Closing verse says so very much. ""Into day Escape dark night"", yes-- for a better life one must walk out of the dark. Step into sunshine, flowering fields , inspiring promise of divinely crafted gifts that await. Very powerful piece you have created my friend. A fav.. please keep thy pen active..
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 5/24/2019 10:29:00 AM
Thank you for your kind comment Robert. I will continue to write until that point where I can't. :)
Date: 5/20/2019 1:56:00 AM
" you are stronger than all his bluest blues broken egg shells ladders in stockings: Wow! Wow! So powerfully done, my friend. WOW
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 5/20/2019 3:50:00 AM
There is true power in words, if placed in the puzzle, the right way Krutsinger. And this is a strong talent that you possess. It would be remiss of me to not say, while I do not comment on all poems - I took the time to read the entire front page of your poetry the other night. I have an affinity with writers who are exceptionally left of centre and highly creative. Some of your most recent poetry has an inspirational strength in the story and in the message. So thank you. I mentioned last year, while writing under my own name, my thoughts on your writing and I stand by them. So thank you for your inspiring stories. The "Ladder" poem you wrote should place No. 1, in my humble opinion. Leanne (smiling).
Date: 5/19/2019 7:12:00 PM
Lyrics/bjork: tabula rasa
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 5/19/2019 7:12:00 PM
https://genius.com/Bjork-tabula-rasa-lyrics
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