Vicious Death

(in reply to Lost Hope in Humanity by Carlos Ocrela)

There's no love in your heart
You said I drained it
Liar!
You're lifeless from the start
With everything I do
I thought you are happy too
Blame me when everything fails
as if it was only me
That I am like everybody else
Maybe yes
Only because I choose you
but you have your evils too
You're a monster in Angel's skin
It's obvious when you grin
My fault, I'm searching love here
So kill me now, kill me dear
Don't hesitate, please have no fear
Just like the guy on the news
Killed 59 then suicide
Oh the moans and the cries
asking why they're afraid to die?
Cause F***k you that's why
Abiding laws, trying to survive
Foolish people living on lies
I've seen the world change
I see how it change you
being pissed with everything I do
I tried explaining my woe
of how much I want to die before you
So kill me please, but stay alive
I want you to die slowly
like a love deprived
Because if there's God in the end
I don't want to see you again.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 11/2/2017 9:24:00 AM
This feels like a release. A letter that was never mailed. I've been there. For me this letting go is so therapeutic. Keep writing my friend for this is probably the best medicine for what ails.
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Wintessa De Guzman
Date: 11/2/2017 9:37:00 AM
Dear Sir Evans, This is really not my own expressions for I never been into the situation. This poem is a product of my critical mind provoked by sympathy to people experiencing such. As much as I would like to share the first part of the poem, but it was written by another poet named Sir Carlos Ocrela. Anyways thanks for the kindest heart. Looking forward to reading more of your poems. :)
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