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Vicious Death

(in reply to Lost Hope in Humanity by Carlos Ocrela) There's no love in your heart You said I drained it Liar! You're lifeless from the start With everything I do I thought you are happy too Blame me when everything fails as if it was only me That I am like everybody else Maybe yes Only because I choose you but you have your evils too You're a monster in Angel's skin It's obvious when you grin My fault, I'm searching love here So kill me now, kill me dear Don't hesitate, please have no fear Just like the guy on the news Killed 59 then suicide Oh the moans and the cries asking why they're afraid to die? Cause F***k you that's why Abiding laws, trying to survive Foolish people living on lies I've seen the world change I see how it change you being pissed with everything I do I tried explaining my woe of how much I want to die before you So kill me please, but stay alive I want you to die slowly like a love deprived Because if there's God in the end I don't want to see you again.

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Date: 11/2/2017 9:24:00 AM
This feels like a release. A letter that was never mailed. I've been there. For me this letting go is so therapeutic. Keep writing my friend for this is probably the best medicine for what ails.
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Wintessa De Guzman
Date: 11/2/2017 9:37:00 AM
Dear Sir Evans, This is really not my own expressions for I never been into the situation. This poem is a product of my critical mind provoked by sympathy to people experiencing such. As much as I would like to share the first part of the poem, but it was written by another poet named Sir Carlos Ocrela. Anyways thanks for the kindest heart. Looking forward to reading more of your poems. :)

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