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Vice

Such a hectic scene of everyday, I wonder of nothing but tomorrow, Hopelessly plugged in to stay, A life for to be borrowed, Nature stepped in and wave, A lifted feeling of my Heart, As lungs gasp and eyes cave, A mind freeing shackles apart, So taste grows shallow and hunger grow deep, But inspiration flow through mountain so steep, May bars never keep and time ever sleep, Keeping me sane, Keeping me quick, By choice and never need, Stillness that flows so deep, Everyday a new idea, I seed, For my vice I will always keep.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 12/7/2015 12:23:00 AM
Thank you for your kind words everyone! Some may think that VICES are bad, but to me, having one just shows that we are human and knowing you have one is the first step to understanding and growing in your true self!
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Date: 12/3/2015 1:08:00 PM
Congratulations Fariq.
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Date: 12/1/2015 8:25:00 PM
congratulations - I enjoyed your poem ... CayCay
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Date: 11/29/2015 9:52:00 PM
Congrats on ur lovely win Fariq with this great write!
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Date: 11/29/2015 9:18:00 PM
Wonderful! Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 11/29/2015 3:16:00 PM
Fariq, a wonderful win. SKAT
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Date: 11/29/2015 11:20:00 AM
Weel done with your winning write, Fariq. Regards, Viv
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