Vibrant Rumors

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July evening sun was setting, red and yellow, Upon the beautiful skies, like the sun's echo! Goldfinch was singing, in a sweet rapid tempo, As red carnations bloomed, like a day in retro. The skies were wine, when moon began to shine, And purple finch sang, a song to his valentine, In the evening's calm, in fragrant lilac times, A world turned surreal, with rumors of divine.

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Karen Jones

Date: 10/7/2021 2:45:00 PM

Enjoy the beautiful imagery in your poem.

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 10/7/2021 7:35:00 PM

Thank you, Karen. :D

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 10/6/2021 6:00:00 PM

Hello Evelyn ... just repeating my other comments. Your poems are always positive and colourful - thanks Evelyn - Lindsay

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 10/6/2021 8:19:00 PM

Thank you for the joy of your heartwarming comments, Lindsay.

Alexis Y.

Date: 10/6/2021 5:40:00 PM

Wow! Evelyn, The picture you chose worked well with your well-written write. You are so skillful at painting beautiful portraits with words. Your use of color is top-notch. The reader is not disappointed after reading your work. Excellent job;-)Alexis

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 10/6/2021 5:48:00 PM

Thank you for your heartwarming thoughts, Alexis. Your appreciation is such a joy. I am so glad you liked it. Blessings, Evelyn :)