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Vibrant Rumors

July evening sun was setting, red and yellow,
Upon the beautiful skies, like the sun's echo!
Goldfinch was singing, in a sweet rapid tempo,
As red carnations bloomed, like a day in retro.

The skies were wine, when moon began to shine,
And purple finch sang, a song to his valentine,
In the evening's calm, in fragrant lilac times,
A world turned surreal, with rumors of divine.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Jones Avatar
October 7, 2021 at 2:45 PM
Enjoy the beautiful imagery in your poem.
Buehler Avatar
October 7, 2021 at 7:35 PM
Thank you, Karen. :D
Laurie Avatar
October 6, 2021 at 6:00 PM
Hello Evelyn ... just repeating my other comments. Your poems are always positive and colourful - thanks Evelyn - Lindsay
Buehler Avatar
October 6, 2021 at 8:19 PM
Thank you for the joy of your heartwarming comments, Lindsay.
Y. Avatar
October 6, 2021 at 5:40 PM
Wow! Evelyn, The picture you chose worked well with your well-written write. You are so skillful at painting beautiful portraits with words. Your use of color is top-notch. The reader is not disappointed after reading your work. Excellent job;-)Alexis
Buehler Avatar
October 6, 2021 at 5:48 PM
Thank you for your heartwarming thoughts, Alexis. Your appreciation is such a joy. I am so glad you liked it. Blessings, Evelyn :)
Rodrigues Avatar
October 4, 2021 at 12:24 PM
Love: The skies were wine, when moon began to shine
Buehler Avatar
October 4, 2021 at 5:48 PM
That's great! Thank you very much. :D
Strand Avatar
October 3, 2021 at 1:23 AM
Very colur filled .matches the pic Evelyn
Buehler Avatar
October 3, 2021 at 10:28 AM
Thank you, Brian. :)
Buhagiar Avatar
October 3, 2021 at 12:53 AM
Divine. Apt description of this poem. :)
Buehler Avatar
October 3, 2021 at 10:30 AM
I appreciate your thoughts, Victor. :)
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