Vibrant emptiness

Making void centric our soul’s stance,
prioritising God-connect,
bliss beats rise and nodes within dance,
tempestuous, wild and unchecked.

Once we become empty and pure,
in staid stillness, fate quirks endure,
granting throb of love right of way,
we garner bliss that’s here to stay.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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January 22, 2024 at 11:39 AM
Great use of form.. I do like the rispetto..
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January 22, 2024 at 5:18 PM
Yes, this is a fairly compact and rhythmic form
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January 22, 2024 at 7:06 AM
Such a deep and uplifting poem which is so very true on so many soul levels dear seeker. I love this rispetto that emanates light and in stillness and in silence we grasp and connect spiritually and find bliss beats. Ah i love the fact that “bliss” is always there in your poems. Pleasure reading
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January 22, 2024 at 7:09 AM
Yes, having imbibed bliss, it automatically features in my poems, I guess :)
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