Vibrant Emptiness

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Thought cessation, with desires to rest lain With no ego to size, we vaporise Inner self shines forth, cleansed of feral stains Thought cessation, with desires to rest lain Boundless bliss in renewal, soul ingrains Magnetism rise, heart beholds in surprise Thought cessation, with desires to rest lain With no ego to size, we vaporise Inner self shines forth, cleansed of feral stains Thought cessation, with desires to rest lain Boundless bliss in renewal, soul ingrains Magnetism rise, heart beholds in surprise With no ego to size, we vaporise Gods love and light within, we realise 03-June-2021 Write a “Trionet” for me poetry contest Sponsor: L Milton Hankins

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Alexis Y.

Date: 6/7/2021 7:56:00 AM

WoW! Seeker, You composed a good entry in this new form. I found it to have a good message and rhymes as well. It looks like a winner to me. Best wishes in the contest:-)Alexis

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 6/7/2021 8:54:00 AM

Thank you for your kind encouragement, Alexis!

Buhagiar Victor

Date: 6/3/2021 9:10:00 AM

You state that this wonderful poem is a sonnet. That's what is required.

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 6/3/2021 7:41:00 PM

True! An interesting format.