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Vibrant Emptiness

Thought cessation, with desires to rest lain 
With no ego to size, we vaporise
Inner self shines forth, cleansed of feral stains
Thought cessation, with desires to rest lain
Boundless bliss in renewal, soul ingrains 
Magnetism rise, heart beholds in surprise 
Thought cessation, with desires to rest lain 
With no ego to size, we vaporise

Inner self shines forth, cleansed of feral stains 
Thought cessation, with desires to rest lain 
Boundless bliss in renewal, soul ingrains 
Magnetism rise, heart beholds in surprise 
With no ego to size, we vaporise 
Gods love and light within, we realise

03-June-2021

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June 7, 2021 at 7:56 AM
WoW! Seeker, You composed a good entry in this new form. I found it to have a good message and rhymes as well. It looks like a winner to me. Best wishes in the contest:-)Alexis
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June 7, 2021 at 8:54 AM
Thank you for your kind encouragement, Alexis!
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June 3, 2021 at 9:10 AM
You state that this wonderful poem is a sonnet. That's what is required.
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June 3, 2021 at 7:41 PM
True! An interesting format.
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