Vesper of Vapor

fog fingers the frost
licking, lifting lovingly
vesper of vapor
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Pettit Avatar
February 17, 2011 at 6:05 PM
I agree with everything Carolyn and Dr. Ram have said about this haiku.
Devonshire Avatar
February 17, 2011 at 1:45 PM
Awesome use of alliteration as well as descriptive imagery, Deb. I love the way it flows! If this is for Deb G's contest, I wish you success. Love, Carolyn
Mehta Avatar
February 17, 2011 at 1:33 PM
Nice alliteration with good picture of the season, deb
Anderson Avatar
February 17, 2011 at 1:18 PM
Very nice Haiku....Jimmy
Dietrich Avatar
February 17, 2011 at 12:58 PM
wow, Deb, you are really good at writing these personification haiku! Nice finding two haiku from you today!
Onclaud Avatar
February 17, 2011 at 12:55 PM
haiku and alliteration put together in a most stinning way, deb... superb write and winning wishes in the contest, if for one! :) huggs, nette
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February 17, 2011 at 12:46 PM
Nice.. way.. of haiku sure enjoyed Deb. Plenty of this trace on my window pane... except the licking... have a nice one Den...p.d.
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