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vesper of vapor

fog fingers the frost licking, lifting lovingly vesper of vapor

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Date: 2/17/2011 6:05:00 PM
I agree with everything Carolyn and Dr. Ram have said about this haiku.
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Date: 2/17/2011 1:45:00 PM
Awesome use of alliteration as well as descriptive imagery, Deb. I love the way it flows! If this is for Deb G's contest, I wish you success. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 2/17/2011 1:33:00 PM
Nice alliteration with good picture of the season, deb
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Date: 2/17/2011 1:18:00 PM
Very nice Haiku....Jimmy
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Date: 2/17/2011 12:58:00 PM
wow, Deb, you are really good at writing these personification haiku! Nice finding two haiku from you today!
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Date: 2/17/2011 12:55:00 PM
haiku and alliteration put together in a most stinning way, deb... superb write and winning wishes in the contest, if for one! :) huggs, nette
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Date: 2/17/2011 12:46:00 PM
Nice.. way.. of haiku sure enjoyed Deb. Plenty of this trace on my window pane... except the licking... have a nice one Den...p.d.
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