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Very Disturbed

There are times when I wonder what it would be like
If this site was no longer, surely become quite unladylike
Use very foul words
I'd be very disturbed
Yelling a bunch of bad words that are far from polite

© Jack Ellison 2015

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Laura Breidenthal

April 25, 2015 at 1:00 AM

The people here are so polite and wonderful here, thankfully! I have yet to meet anyone otherwise. I'd be disturbed as well Jack. Great thoughts. Thanks for sharing. Always, Laura

Jack Ellison

April 25, 2015 at 6:33 AM

You, my sweet Laura, are at the top of the list!!!!!!! xxx

Leo Larry Amadore

April 24, 2015 at 7:15 PM

We all appreciate your restraint...and your posted work!

Jack Ellison

April 24, 2015 at 7:51 PM

Hope Poetry Soup is around till I'm not!!! Thanks for dropping by my friend!

Lindsay Laurie

April 24, 2015 at 7:13 PM

I was told my an entertainer many years ago, if you upset one person in your audience then you have failed. The best way to upset people is to be smutty and crude, and some think bad language and graphic detail is funny... they're wrong. Thank you Jack - Lindsay

Jack Ellison

April 24, 2015 at 7:42 PM

That man was right on the money! Crude has not place here on the Soup!!! Cheers, Jack

Carol Eastman

April 24, 2015 at 1:13 PM

Never fear Jack for We are here... For your teachings and entertainment... So you'll need never know that sorrow bestoyed... Cause we don't intend to let you go... Yep, with us you're both wealthy in love and famous...

Jack Ellison

April 24, 2015 at 3:37 PM

Promise that it ever does go belly up, we will still correspond by email! Our friendship is for life! Hugs, dear Carol xxx

Jan Allison

April 24, 2015 at 11:06 AM

We can all push the boundaries a little Jack but it is knowing how far - I have asked PS on numerous occassions for an alert button when those boundaries have been breached - I have seen porno poems here that should be in the gutter rather than posted on a site whcere children can read them - I would rather have that than a link to 2facedbook which i don't do - off my soapbox now:-) Hugs jan xx

Jan Allison

April 24, 2015 at 2:01 PM

I have asked at least 4 times Jack - no response - such a shame - Becca has hit the nail straight on the head - hey ho maybe one day it will happen but it doesnt seem to be a priority:-) Hugs Jan xx

Jack Ellison

April 24, 2015 at 11:22 AM

Why are they not responding??? I'm sure it's obvious which ones should be banned! Jan for mayor!!! LOL Hugs, Jack xxx

Anna Hopper

April 24, 2015 at 8:57 AM

I think that most poets have a sense of class. Don't get me wrong, I love to push the limits just a bit. If it gets to a certain point, though, it isn't really art ( in my opinion).

Jack Ellison

April 24, 2015 at 9:04 AM

You are right on the money, dear Anna! It's knowing how far is too far! Thanks for dropping in my friend! Huggs, Jack xxx

Kp Nunez

April 24, 2015 at 7:49 AM

No, we can't have that, can we, Jack? Freedom to express oneself does not give one the license to be an a...hole on PS. Many are doing that by themselves outside here, without them bringing their cr..p on here too. lol!

Jan Allison

April 24, 2015 at 11:03 AM

LOL Kim I love that powerful comment:-) :-) Hugs Jan xx

Jack Ellison

April 24, 2015 at 7:54 AM

It's a worldwide illness! But we have us poet guys to brighten up our day every day! Love ya... xxx