Verses For Vivian

She hides a jar of dread
Underneath the bed
With other bottled pains

Until her feelings rust,
Collecting tears and dust
And cobwebs of old shame.   

But when the night arrives,  
She's just a name on a stone,
And a box of cold bones
That yearn to be alive.

She hides another lover
Under satin covers
To wallow in warm lies

Until she can forget
The folds of deep regret
That drape her weary guise.

But when the night arrives,  
She's just a name on a stone,
And a box of cold bones
That yearn to be alive.

Yes, when the night arrives,
She yearns to be alive.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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A  Avatar
July 18, 2013 at 10:50 PM
Heather, , Anne, has nice taste ..... congrats with your Song Lyrics entry... love~ SKAT
Merryman Avatar
July 15, 2013 at 10:07 PM
Congrats on your win, Heather! This is fantastic! Love, Kim
Gildersleeve Avatar
July 15, 2013 at 9:52 AM
Heather, enjoyed your Lyric. A fabulous write. Congrats on you excellent win. Warm Smiles, Connie
A   Avatar
July 14, 2013 at 5:47 PM
enjoyed your winning poem, in the lyric poem contest.... always *LINDA
Zerbst Avatar
July 14, 2013 at 5:19 PM
Now, I hardly ever give out congrat's to contest winners, but I think this one well deserves it! So, here goes. CONGRATS!
Lamoureux Avatar
July 14, 2013 at 8:01 AM
Wow! Adding to favorited. Congrats
Jones Avatar
July 14, 2013 at 7:37 AM
Congrats..well done
Lawrence Avatar
June 13, 2013 at 1:32 AM
Inteeeeeeense.
Truly Avatar
June 4, 2013 at 11:38 AM
Great symbolism in your poem it was a good read :) -Yours Truly
Dietrich Avatar
May 29, 2013 at 9:28 PM
this is so so sad. The dread line I really get!!! Love it.
Zerbst Avatar
May 29, 2013 at 8:37 PM
Fantastic Write! I like your rhymes and form, and everything else about it. It flows so natural like. Butter, cream, oil; anything ya like. Keep this up!
Anglesey Avatar
May 29, 2013 at 4:59 PM
Pure cryptic delight... the twist and turns make it difficult to discern if Vivian is in the ground under the tombstone or if she is alive ....you have written such brilliant metaphor that I will be scratching my head over the possibilities.. Poetic masterpiece !
Manassian Avatar
May 29, 2013 at 2:44 PM
Hey Cutie! This is amazing! WOW! I think Craig is right! On Oberelle! Beautiful in a sad haunting way! Missed ya! Thanks for the visit!
Hunter Avatar
May 28, 2013 at 7:12 AM
I agree with Becca...strange, dark, and intriguing....great verse...hmmm...this needs music to it...dark and melodious music. I can almost hear it.
Calubiran Avatar
May 27, 2013 at 8:53 PM
waiting for Vivian to come alive. Huehuehue............. (/>_<)/ _|__|_
Jordan Avatar
May 27, 2013 at 7:55 PM
I like the built-in coldness. It's very appropriate. Fine work... Jack
Onclaud Avatar
May 27, 2013 at 12:58 PM
this gives me shivers in a most delightful way... you rammed it with a sting of loneliness, so human...:) greeat stuff!..:) huggs
Richards Avatar
May 27, 2013 at 9:47 AM
Wow........this took a second reading!! Dark, troubling........and strangely fascinating...... many visions to disturb!
Tacito Avatar
May 27, 2013 at 9:41 AM
Holy crap, this was phenomenal. "She hides another lover under satin covers to wallow in warm lies". MASSIVE STANZA! Damn. Favorite.
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