Verse Freed To Elegise

The sun will rise,the sun will set,
no more love will life beget;
The day will break,the moon to rise,
no more love,as this life dies.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Thompson Avatar
November 30, 2020 at 5:39 PM
Great job on this poem Brian. I really enjoyed how powerful this little piece was. Look forward to reading more. Have a wonderful week. Jess
Strand Avatar
November 30, 2020 at 10:01 PM
Cheers Jess,thank you for your kind words
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