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VERSE FREED to elegise

The sun will rise,the sun will set, no more love will life beget; The day will break,the moon to rise, no more love,as this life dies.

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Date: 11/30/2020 5:39:00 PM
Great job on this poem Brian. I really enjoyed how powerful this little piece was. Look forward to reading more. Have a wonderful week. Jess
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Brian Strand
Date: 11/30/2020 10:01:00 PM
Cheers Jess,thank you for your kind words