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My heart is going away from me
How do i do away with me

The inside war is underway
The white forces still making the day

warfree verse

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Judy Ball

August 31, 2021 at 3:53 AM

Look to The Light my friend. Find courage, strength and wisdom in the Words of Christ. God Bless, JB

Muhammad Imtiaz

September 5, 2025 at 11:30 PM

Thanks Judy, we love Jesus Christ peace be upon him

David Smith

February 4, 2020 at 12:13 AM

Look forward to day you are up to posting again. Best regards in NZ

Muhammad Imtiaz

February 4, 2020 at 12:27 AM

Thanks David, Actually i have been too much busy with my job , i cannot post new stuff. Hopefully i will do . thanks for visiting my page

Darlene De Beaulieu

September 14, 2018 at 12:28 PM

Hello Muhammad,it sounds to as I read this verse,that you a Have a nice day my friend.re having a battle with yourself. Yes that is what I understand as I read this poem.

Richard Lamoureux

September 3, 2018 at 9:20 AM

I hope you discover your light! Thanks for your visit.

Muhammad Imtiaz

September 21, 2018 at 7:39 AM

Your are always welcome my friend

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri

August 11, 2018 at 4:40 AM

Nice word play, poetic feelings and how u express in brief. Thumbs up. Pleez do comment on my newest poem too.

L. J. Carber

June 22, 2018 at 11:23 AM

That war wages within every human heart, Muhammad-- it is human nature that we must go either towards the light (the 'white forces') or towards darkness. (Would like to see you expand on this into a longer poem).

Muhammad Imtiaz

June 30, 2023 at 10:21 PM

you reached to the point where it ought to be. Thanks for fair and just explanation. BR

Muhammad Imtiaz

June 24, 2018 at 2:27 AM

Thanks L.J. Carber. I will surely do it when i got time.