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Image result for pictures of vermillion sun rising against cobalt clouds gathering Robert Collum word count type of haiku. 3/5/3

vermillion

vermillion sun rising
reveals cobalt clouds swiftly gathering....
mourning dove coos

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Andrea Dietrich

June 30, 2026 at 8:27 PM

Keep those word count haiku coming!

Sara Kendrick

July 1, 2026 at 4:33 AM

I can only hope that something different inspires me, Andrea. Your visits are inspiring. Sara K.

sara Etgen-Baker

June 27, 2026 at 4:28 PM

an exquisite and beautifully penned Haiku, Sara K. Faving.

Sara Kendrick

June 28, 2026 at 3:58 AM

Thank you, Sara B., for the kind review and the honor of it being faved. Sara K.

Valsa George

June 25, 2026 at 7:22 AM

Another beautiful haiku. You watch the changing hues of the sky during sunrise and sunset.

Sara Kendrick

June 25, 2026 at 1:57 PM

I catch them sometimes, Valsa. This morning there was a vermillion sunrise and that always reminds me of the saying, "Red sunrise in the morning, sailors take warning". I like sunrises and sunsets with color, but I don't get to see them as much as I once did. Sara K.

Ken Martin

June 25, 2026 at 4:12 AM

Oh this was surprising, very beautiful poem this one. Nice job. I forget about Vermillion most of the time, I often misuse it and think it a different color than that which it is, out of habit.

Sara Kendrick

June 25, 2026 at 4:38 AM

It is an unusual shade of red isn't it, Ken. Thank you for the visit and kind review. Sara K.

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