Vermilion Dawn Chaos

¦¦¦ ¦¦¦ ¦¦¦ lying in my bed
I heard ¦¦¦ ¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦ ¦¦¦¦¦
¦¦¦¦¦¦ one solemn word ¦¦¦ said
A bird began to sing.

I heard a dog ¦¦¦¦¦ ¦¦¦ ¦¦¦¦
And a ¦¦¦¦ ¦¦¦¦¦¦¦ cock;
¦¦¦ ¦¦¦¦¦ ¦¦¦¦¦¦¦ ¦¦¦ ¦¦¦¦ ¦¦¦ ¦¦¦¦¦
¦¦¦¦¦¦¦ It was five o'clock.

The ¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦ ¦¦¦¦¦¦¦ ¦¦¦ bird sang,
¦¦¦ ¦¦¦¦¦ ¦¦¦¦ ¦¦¦¦¦ ¦¦¦ ¦¦¦¦
The cock ¦¦¦¦¦ ¦¦¦ ¦¦¦ ¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦ ¦¦¦¦¦
¦¦¦ ¦¦¦¦ ¦¦¦ had gone mad.

¦¦¦ ¦¦¦¦ ¦¦¦¦¦¦¦ ¦¦¦¦ ¦¦¦¦ the dark skies,
¦¦¦ ¦¦¦¦ ¦¦¦ ¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦ ¦¦¦¦¦¦
¦¦¦ ¦¦¦¦ cried "Look! Lift up your eyes!"
¦¦¦ ¦¦¦¦¦¦¦ ¦¦¦¦¦ ¦¦¦ ¦¦¦¦¦

¦¦¦ ¦¦¦¦ ¦¦¦¦¦¦¦ ¦¦¦¦¦¦¦ ¦¦¦¦¦¦
¦¦¦¦ ¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦ wind and wave;
¦¦¦ ¦¦¦¦ cried out ¦¦¦ ¦¦¦¦¦¦ ¦¦¦ ¦¦¦¦¦¦¦
¦¦¦¦¦ ¦¦¦¦ ¦¦¦ ¦¦¦¦¦¦ "Be brave!"

The ¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦ ¦¦¦ ¦¦¦ market-carts,
The pounding of men's feet
Were drowned in song; ¦¦¦¦¦ ¦¦¦ ¦¦¦¦ ¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦
The song was loud and sweet.

¦¦¦¦ ¦¦¦ ¦¦¦¦ ¦¦¦ ¦¦¦¦¦ ¦¦¦¦ ¦¦¦¦¦¦
¦¦¦ ¦¦¦¦ ¦¦¦ ¦¦¦ ¦¦¦¦¦¦¦ ¦¦¦¦¦
¦¦¦ ¦¦¦¦¦¦ ¦¦¦¦ ¦¦¦ ¦¦¦¦¦¦ ¦¦¦¦¦¦
¦¦¦ ¦¦¦ ¦¦¦ ¦¦¦¦ ¦¦¦¦¦


(Blackout of The Church-Bell by Elinor Wylie)
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Daniel Avatar
September 15, 2026 at 11:36 PM
Well done, Evelyn, on its own, you have given new meaning to this poem...
Buehler Avatar
September 16, 2026 at 12:14 PM
Deepest thanks, Joanna.😄🌸
Poet Avatar
September 11, 2026 at 4:51 AM
Evelyn, the fragmented style of this poem adds to its mystique and chaotic energy but makes comprehension challenging, leaving much to the imagination. It suggest vivid imagery and an energetic morning scene.
Buehler Avatar
September 11, 2026 at 2:42 PM
Heartfelt thanks for your words of appreciation, Sotto. Have a wonderful day. 😄✍️
Andresen Avatar
September 11, 2026 at 2:36 AM
- Sounds we love waking up to... a lovely poem, Evelyn :) - Have a great weekend :) - hugs
Buehler Avatar
September 11, 2026 at 2:38 PM
Deepest thanks, Anne-Lise. I hope your weekend is lovely, too. 😄 hugs 🌹
Rolland Avatar
September 10, 2026 at 11:53 PM
wonderful, first thing i do, when waking up, is listening birds, thanks you so much
Buehler Avatar
September 11, 2026 at 2:35 PM
Yes, birdsong is wonderful to wake up to. Thank you for the joy of your comment, Yann. 😄🕊️🌸
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