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NOTE::THIS IS AN OPEN(organic) FORM VERSE using spaces&breaks without grammatical symbols ,the ' open' relies upon 'the one breath limitation' (intuitive cadence)& so inherently requires the 'reader' (reciter) to input and responds thus making this enigmatic form a two way interplay & interpretatIon unique to the mom

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..he
    ...remembers
..he sketches

moments
      of intimate
interplay
       the
detail begins
      & joy outflows
aglow
in
        close-ups

in looks of love
into
     eternity's eyes

such innocence
displayed
by
delicate faces
to
    tantalise

portraits
in
time

yesterdays
preserved
      in paint
a museum
   of memories
in enigmas unsolved

looks
    to read
the sereness
      between muse
and our eyes

a mirror
      sublime
        
     preserved
in
  paint

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