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Verily

Verily, verily Violent truth has come Vagabond of heaven Visage of holiness Veering the world off course Vindicator of the Vulnerable - that’s us 5/5/2021 Pleiades V Sponsor: Kim Merryman HMS verifies 6 syllables each line

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Paul Callus
Date: 5/13/2021 12:12:00 PM
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A verily well tackled Pleiades, Kim! I like how you ended it. Congratulations on your fine win. ~ Regards // paul
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/13/2021 5:14:00 PM
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LOL...thanks, Paul!
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Joseph May
Date: 5/10/2021 3:24:00 AM
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Very nicely done Kim, Congrats on your win..
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/10/2021 5:23:00 AM
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Thank you, Joseph!
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Marilene Evans
Date: 5/9/2021 7:20:00 PM
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Congratulations. Well written. Continue enjoying your Mother's Day. We deserved our special day. Nice to know our kids take an extra mile to show how they care for us on Mother's Day.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/10/2021 5:22:00 AM
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They do! Hope you had a wonderful Mother’s Day!
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 5/9/2021 4:30:00 PM
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you did a great job with this one, Kim. Congrats
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/9/2021 5:50:00 PM
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Thank you, Andrea! <3
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Quoth Theraven
Date: 5/8/2021 7:27:00 PM
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Kim, This is one of the brightest stars in Pleiades so far. Verily, verily in six..Happy Mother's Day week-end. -Richard
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/9/2021 5:45:00 PM
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Thank you, Richard. I had a good day with my kids and grands although sadly first one without my sweet mom.
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Kim Merryman
Date: 5/8/2021 12:00:00 PM
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Kim, I especially love the last two lines! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/8/2021 6:12:00 PM
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Thank you, Kim :)
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/8/2021 11:42:00 AM
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- Congratulations on your win in the contest, Kim - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/8/2021 6:12:00 PM
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Thank you, Anne-Lise!
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 5/7/2021 11:50:00 AM
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I know better than to try this contest now - every poem I have read has been perfect. This one too.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/8/2021 6:12:00 PM
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You would do great! Thank you :)
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/7/2021 5:31:00 AM
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- Well done with the letter V, Kim :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - Have a lovely weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Buhagiar Victor
Date: 5/6/2021 2:15:00 AM
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That's a deep Pleiades, Kim. Best for a win.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/6/2021 5:06:00 AM
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Thank you, Victor!
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 5/6/2021 12:48:00 AM
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Truth spoken here. We are, indeed, fragile. Handle with care. :) gw
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/6/2021 5:06:00 AM
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Thank you, Gershon!
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Harry Horsman
Date: 5/5/2021 9:47:00 PM
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Loved how you voiced the v's Kim, excellent rendering and the truth.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/6/2021 5:06:00 AM
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Thank you, Harry!

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