Kim Rodrigues Poet Verse

Verily

Verily, verily
Violent truth has come
Vagabond of heaven
Visage of holiness
Veering the world off course
Vindicator of the
Vulnerable - that’s us

5/5/2021
Pleiades V
Sponsor: Kim Merryman
HMS verifies 6 syllables each line

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Paul Callus May 13, 2021 at 12:12 PM A verily well tackled Pleiades, Kim! I like how you ended it. Congratulations on your fine win. ~ Regards // paul Kim Rodrigues May 13, 2021 at 5:14 PM LOL...thanks, Paul!

Joseph May May 10, 2021 at 3:24 AM Very nicely done Kim, Congrats on your win.. Kim Rodrigues May 10, 2021 at 5:23 AM Thank you, Joseph!

Marilene Evans May 9, 2021 at 7:20 PM Congratulations. Well written. Continue enjoying your Mother's Day. We deserved our special day. Nice to know our kids take an extra mile to show how they care for us on Mother's Day. Kim Rodrigues May 10, 2021 at 5:22 AM They do! Hope you had a wonderful Mother’s Day!

Andrea Dietrich May 9, 2021 at 4:30 PM you did a great job with this one, Kim. Congrats Kim Rodrigues May 9, 2021 at 5:50 PM Thank you, Andrea! <3

Quoth Theraven May 8, 2021 at 7:27 PM Kim, This is one of the brightest stars in Pleiades so far. Verily, verily in six..Happy Mother's Day week-end. -Richard Kim Rodrigues May 9, 2021 at 5:45 PM Thank you, Richard. I had a good day with my kids and grands although sadly first one without my sweet mom.

Kim Merryman May 8, 2021 at 12:00 PM Kim, I especially love the last two lines! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M Kim Rodrigues May 8, 2021 at 6:12 PM Thank you, Kim :)

Anne-Lise Andresen May 8, 2021 at 11:42 AM - Congratulations on your win in the contest, Kim - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Kim Rodrigues May 8, 2021 at 6:12 PM Thank you, Anne-Lise!

Caren Krutsinger May 7, 2021 at 11:50 AM I know better than to try this contest now - every poem I have read has been perfect. This one too. Kim Rodrigues May 8, 2021 at 6:12 PM You would do great! Thank you :)

Anne-Lise Andresen May 7, 2021 at 5:31 AM - Well done with the letter V, Kim :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - Have a lovely weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Victor Buhagiar May 6, 2021 at 2:15 AM That's a deep Pleiades, Kim. Best for a win. Kim Rodrigues May 6, 2021 at 5:06 AM Thank you, Victor!

Gershon Wolf May 6, 2021 at 12:48 AM Truth spoken here. We are, indeed, fragile. Handle with care. :) gw Kim Rodrigues May 6, 2021 at 5:06 AM Thank you, Gershon!

Harry Horsman May 5, 2021 at 9:47 PM Loved how you voiced the v's Kim, excellent rendering and the truth. Kim Rodrigues May 6, 2021 at 5:06 AM Thank you, Harry!