Ryan Emerald Poet Free verse

Verbal Altercation

Your an idiot 
no your an idiot

some claim we are idiots
the fighting never stops

some argue about spelling 
some argue 'bout life 
 
but in our world
no one wins the fight

we have fought and forget the reason
Montague and Capulets a wonderful example

there feud killed there loved ones 
and still people hate 'em

why do we fight 
to only be noticed

so is it wrong
to have it all
in this Verbal Altercation?

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Carol Sunshine Brown October 4, 2010 at 9:41 AM Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week at PoetrySoup Ryan. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart October 3, 2010 at 9:18 PM Congrats Ryan on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. a nice one to share with us all with luv..

Latisha Pennywell February 17, 2010 at 12:43 PM this is a good poem keep up the good work! and thanks for the comment its greatly appreciated!

Dani Sousa February 17, 2010 at 8:33 AM omg hun, thats is a great poem! keep writeing <3 -D.Dimaio

Abdullahi Hagar February 15, 2010 at 6:43 PM Interesting and bold. I enjoyed the clever approach inwhich you used the words. As i read your poem, the fact that it reads like an altercation is evident. If you keep on finding new and clever ways to use your words, trust me your gonna have many fans - me being fan no1.