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Verbal Altercation

Your an idiot no your an idiot some claim we are idiots the fighting never stops some argue about spelling some argue 'bout life but in our world no one wins the fight we have fought and forget the reason Montague and Capulets a wonderful example there feud killed there loved ones and still people hate 'em why do we fight to only be noticed so is it wrong to have it all in this Verbal Altercation?

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Date: 10/4/2010 9:41:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week at PoetrySoup Ryan. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/3/2010 9:18:00 PM
Congrats Ryan on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. a nice one to share with us all with luv..
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Date: 2/17/2010 12:43:00 PM
this is a good poem keep up the good work! and thanks for the comment its greatly appreciated!
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Date: 2/17/2010 8:33:00 AM
omg hun, thats is a great poem! keep writeing <3 -D.Dimaio
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Date: 2/15/2010 6:43:00 PM
Interesting and bold. I enjoyed the clever approach inwhich you used the words. As i read your poem, the fact that it reads like an altercation is evident. If you keep on finding new and clever ways to use your words, trust me your gonna have many fans - me being fan no1.
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