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Veranda

After the thunder and lightning storm Raindrops steadily fall It washes the air clean for now Veranda my name calls Everything is pollen coated Birds of the air seem fine Doves coo to their love in phrases Sparrows chirp to others their line It is a musical chorus Each species comes in on cue The raindrops a soft cymbal Crows caw the trumpet due How enjoyable these few moments If only could last for days But then the water might be rising So that wish needs to delay Precious can be the memories Scattered my whole life through Will my computer retrieve them Later when its no longer new
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Leffanta Avatar
April 17, 2022 at 11:48 AM
I don't have a clue! Enjoyed! Aloha!
Kendrick Avatar
April 17, 2022 at 1:45 PM
Rico, Our brains are very much like a computer so I am comparing my brain where my memories are stored to a computer that has aged, the memory is overloaded, everything gets hard and hard to retrieve. I appreciate the visit to my page. Sara
Daniel Avatar
April 17, 2022 at 5:23 AM
Great contemplative poetry, Sara:)
Kendrick Avatar
April 17, 2022 at 1:41 PM
Thank you, Jo. I appreciate the visit. Sara
George Avatar
April 17, 2022 at 5:07 AM
After the storm subsides and the rain loses its strength, but still dripping, it is a beautiful moment when all grime is washed away and birds begin to sing ! We wish this happy interlude should stay ! Well done Sara !
Kendrick Avatar
April 17, 2022 at 8:49 AM
Thank you, Valsa. I appreciate the kind review. Sara
Pandit Avatar
April 17, 2022 at 4:49 AM
Enjoyed the upbeat tenor of your poem Sara. Beautiful sights and sounds of nature.
Kendrick Avatar
April 17, 2022 at 8:45 AM
Why, thank you, Vijay. I appreciate the kind review. Sara
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