Venus Paradise

On rainy days when I was young
And things could not get duller,
I’d take my Venus Paradise
And I’d begin to color.

The pictures all had numbered spots
You’d fill in one by one
And when the scenes were colored in,
Your masterpiece was done.

The pencils came in varied hues
To match the sketched-out action.
A finished drawing gave to me
Tremendous satisfaction.

If you are of a certain age,
You’ll know of what I speak,
For Venus Paradise today
Is likely an antique!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Mcleod Avatar
December 31, 2014 at 12:32 PM
Enjoyed! Well written, short and sweet!
Johnson Avatar
December 30, 2014 at 10:43 PM
Well I have never heard of this, so I was anticipating something else. I must say, while I'm glad it gave you satisfaction, it left me a little flat. :) My, what that title made my mind think. :) Peace. :)
Krier Avatar
December 30, 2014 at 3:04 PM
Ty ilene, we sort a need the finite. Mine is the dictionaryJ5
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