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Venus in View Oh, megalithic moon, shine your rays upon my beatific being For in this jubilant June, our hearts aflutter forever fleeing My Venus stands still, a Goddess of the crimson songful sky Within a throbbing thrill, my love comes in with a soulful shy Oh Aphrodite grant me courage as the jewels of heaven glow May the oracles flaunty furnish our embrace of eternities echo And thus our love will flourish for the petals of desire bestow. June.22.2018 Seven lines of romantic heaven Sponsored by: Silent One

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Date: 7/5/2018 4:55:00 AM
Hi John, this is such an awesome write, a poetic gem flowing gold from your golden pen. Your words paint such a heavenly vision. I do so enjoy reading your excellent poetry my friend. This has to be a fave, an awesome write. Have a wonderful Thursday. Your friend always....Mike.
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Date: 6/29/2018 1:57:00 PM
Congratulations, WW, on another well-deserved win. What a stunning write! Hugs. Pandita
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Date: 6/27/2018 8:16:00 PM
^WW^, congratulations on your win, a very beautiful verse . Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 6/26/2018 6:55:00 PM
Congrats on this beauty, WW!
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Date: 6/26/2018 7:35:00 AM
Congratulations on your number 1 win, Winged Warrior !
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Date: 6/25/2018 11:29:00 PM
Congratulations on your top win with this beautiful inspired poem. The imagery and your talent for describing are awesome!
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Date: 6/25/2018 6:41:00 PM
Many congratulations on your top win in the contest, it was a really lovely poem and certianly a joy to read
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Date: 6/25/2018 6:21:00 PM
Congrats on the top spot WW, Venus is still smiling.....
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Date: 6/25/2018 3:51:00 PM
A top winner! I take great pleasure in sending congratulations to you, WW!
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Date: 6/25/2018 3:04:00 PM
I have always loved this painting by French artist Alexandre Cabanel. I hope one day to see it in person. Your inspired poem is brilliant WW! Congratulations on your well deserved top podium win! : )
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Date: 6/25/2018 2:48:00 PM
Congratulations! What a lovely description!:)
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Date: 6/25/2018 9:43:00 AM
Delighted to be back with congratulations :) A lovely day to you dear poet! xomo
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Date: 6/25/2018 8:48:00 AM
Beautifully brilliant, congratulations on your 1st place WW, Mick
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Date: 6/25/2018 8:34:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win WW, beautifully written. :))
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Date: 6/25/2018 7:21:00 AM
A gem of a write flourishing with romance, WW. Congratulations on your well deserved win in the contest. T.J
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Date: 6/25/2018 7:19:00 AM
Back to say Congratulations for your top win WW :)
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Date: 6/25/2018 6:59:00 AM
Back with congrats WW on your first place in the contest.
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Date: 6/25/2018 6:34:00 AM
That must have been some view.. Great romantic lines of poetry WW... Congratulations on your first place in the contest..
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Date: 6/25/2018 3:08:00 AM
Excellent. Lovely poetry. Thanks for sharing it.
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Date: 6/24/2018 6:15:00 PM
Beautifully written WW! :)
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Date: 6/24/2018 10:57:00 AM
Tender and sweet....a treat. Good luck in the contest, WW.
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Date: 6/22/2018 6:24:00 PM
such celestial glow throughout your lines; how wonderful to read you today,WW...huggs
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Date: 6/22/2018 11:08:00 AM
Your seven lines are from heaven! You raised very high the voice of your poetic heart and mind.. So rich in imagery and wording.. Your imagination is unique and beyond what is prevailing.. A FAV and a win for me.. I tremendously enjoyed reading your beauty.. Stay blessed Winged Warrior.
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Date: 6/22/2018 9:46:00 AM
Lovely poetry WW..best for a BIG win.
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Date: 6/22/2018 8:49:00 AM
Lovely! The moon and Venus, my dusk dance partners, or rather I theirs ;) never do I tire of their sight. My best to you in the contest. xomo
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