Winged Warrior Poet Rhyme

Venus In View

Venus in View


Oh, megalithic moon, shine your rays upon my beatific being
For in this jubilant June, our hearts aflutter forever fleeing
My Venus stands still, a Goddess of the crimson songful sky
Within a throbbing thrill, my love comes in with a soulful shy
Oh Aphrodite grant me courage as the jewels of heaven glow
May the oracles flaunty furnish our embrace of eternities echo
And thus our love will flourish for the petals of desire bestow.





June.22.2018
Seven lines of romantic heaven 
Sponsored by: Silent One 

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Vladislav Raven July 5, 2018 at 4:55 AM Hi John, this is such an awesome write, a poetic gem flowing gold from your golden pen. Your words paint such a heavenly vision. I do so enjoy reading your excellent poetry my friend. This has to be a fave, an awesome write. Have a wonderful Thursday. Your friend always....Mike.

Pandita Sietesantos June 29, 2018 at 1:57 PM Congratulations, WW, on another well-deserved win. What a stunning write! Hugs. Pandita

Eve Roper June 27, 2018 at 8:16 PM ^WW^, congratulations on your win, a very beautiful verse . Hugs Eve ~`*

Kim Rodrigues June 26, 2018 at 6:55 PM Congrats on this beauty, WW!

Warren Doll June 26, 2018 at 7:35 AM Congratulations on your number 1 win, Winged Warrior !

Susan Gentry June 25, 2018 at 11:29 PM Congratulations on your top win with this beautiful inspired poem. The imagery and your talent for describing are awesome!

Faraz Ajmal June 25, 2018 at 6:41 PM Many congratulations on your top win in the contest, it was a really lovely poem and certianly a joy to read

John Lawless June 25, 2018 at 6:21 PM Congrats on the top spot WW, Venus is still smiling.....

Edward Ibeh June 25, 2018 at 3:51 PM A top winner! I take great pleasure in sending congratulations to you, WW!

Connie Marcum Wong June 25, 2018 at 3:04 PM I have always loved this painting by French artist Alexandre Cabanel. I hope one day to see it in person. Your inspired poem is brilliant WW! Congratulations on your well deserved top podium win! : )

Mansi Sharma June 25, 2018 at 2:48 PM Congratulations! What a lovely description!:)

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart June 25, 2018 at 9:43 AM Delighted to be back with congratulations :) A lovely day to you dear poet! xomo

Mick Talbot June 25, 2018 at 8:48 AM Beautifully brilliant, congratulations on your 1st place WW, Mick

Roy Pett June 25, 2018 at 8:34 AM Congratulations on your well deserved win WW, beautifully written. :))

Heidi Sands June 25, 2018 at 7:19 AM Back to say Congratulations for your top win WW :)

Vijay Pandit June 25, 2018 at 6:59 AM Back with congrats WW on your first place in the contest.

Silent One June 25, 2018 at 6:34 AM That must have been some view.. Great romantic lines of poetry WW... Congratulations on your first place in the contest..

Ravi Sathasivam June 25, 2018 at 3:08 AM Excellent. Lovely poetry. Thanks for sharing it.

Heidi Sands June 24, 2018 at 6:15 PM Beautifully written WW! :)

Eileen Manassian June 24, 2018 at 10:57 AM Tender and sweet....a treat. Good luck in the contest, WW.

Nette Onclaud June 22, 2018 at 6:24 PM such celestial glow throughout your lines; how wonderful to read you today,WW...huggs

Besma Riabi Dziri June 22, 2018 at 11:08 AM Your seven lines are from heaven! You raised very high the voice of your poetic heart and mind.. So rich in imagery and wording.. Your imagination is unique and beyond what is prevailing.. A FAV and a win for me.. I tremendously enjoyed reading your beauty.. Stay blessed Winged Warrior.

Vijay Pandit June 22, 2018 at 9:46 AM Lovely poetry WW..best for a BIG win.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart June 22, 2018 at 8:49 AM Lovely! The moon and Venus, my dusk dance partners, or rather I theirs ;) never do I tire of their sight. My best to you in the contest. xomo

Lyric Man June 22, 2018 at 6:38 AM WW.. I enjoyed reading your "Venus In View"poem this morning. I especially liked your excellent word choice. This should fair quite well in SO's contest!